The Storm

You and I are like thunder and lightning
Colliding together
So intense yet so beautiful
I crave to be tangled up in you
Beating hearts making one
Your body is a holy temple
Surronded in the gates of heaven
and im praying to come inside
My body throbs for your essence
Leaving me on my knees
Pleading for mercy
Breathing in your intoxicating fumes
As our bodies pulse to the magnetic force
and we become whole
I release everything unto you
We become numb and motionless
As the storm fades away
Your whispers of temptation ring in my ears
Creating blissful foreplay and
making the blood rush to my head
Once more we call upon our storm
to come again

Author's Note

No punctuation, no order. Just freestyle from the notebook. The way I like it haha

Reviews

[poet_feefee]

This makes everyone want to experience the storm. My favorite part is "I crave to be tangled up in you". I think I remember that feeling. ;)

[jesserose99]

this is a storm I would like to get caught in. beautiful words, love the free flow of it so freestyle suits your poetic tone. can feel the strength of desire. lovely poem.

[Rachael Lea]

That is a very nice picture that you were able to create with your words. In freestyle too. Great job!