Abort Take-off

Abort Take-off

A Poem by rubie

Abort Take-off (A senryu)

 

Roar down the runway

G forces press against me

No wind ‘neath my wings

© 2015 rubie


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A beautiful senryu Rubie!

Posted 8 Years Ago


rubie

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review, Sharon!
Sometimes life is hard and you're grounded, but love finds a way to lift your wings eventually just has to be a long runway!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


rubie

8 Years Ago

Very true...
Thank you for your review, and the visit.
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

most welcome I like your style!
Ah, it's been in ages .. reading your work!

It's all 'bout the ups and downs of life that either takes one beyond horizons or leave one lone behind frozen winds. Kinda deep poetry (senryu) you've come up with. Interesting... how you capture life or its moment in few words. Nice shot!

Posted 8 Years Ago


rubie

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind review.
Welcome back!
sometimes we just give up on life and love...instead of a Highway to Hell, it is a runway...yet we still can't get out of our own way.

Posted 8 Years Ago


rubie

8 Years Ago

so true, my friend.
thanks for the review.

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I am a retired high school English teacher from New Jersey where I've lived all my life, except for 4 years when I lived in Philadelphia in the mid 1970s. I enjoy reading the work of other writer.. more..

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