Such A Sin

Something that I've been wanting to write for a while now.

Is it such a sin, to want to know her name?
The name of the girl who damned our relationship.
The name of the girl who has sent us to hell.

Is it such a sin, to know who she is?
The girl who tore you from me.
The girl who has stolen you away.

Is it such a sin, to want to be in love with one?
The girl who took your heart.
The girl who broke your love.

Is it such a sin, that I want only you?
But you can have feelings for more.
But you can like and love us both.

There is no such sin.
No such sin that will bound me to be damned because of my want.
My need.

There is no such sin.
There is no such hate, or will that changes me.
There is not feeling that will overcome who I am.

There is a sin, that will claim you.
The sin that makes you love her and I.
The sin that makes you want her and I.

This sin.
This sin, has a name.
A name so cruel, it kills.

This sin, is love.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think, and if possible change some stuff around. Please and thank you!

Reviews

[J.J. SILVESTRO]

The poem should stay as it is. It's complete. It paints a picture of lost love. Its simple and powerful and direct to the point. Keep writing from your heart. Its the true path to enlightenment. Very nice.

[Bejn Jonathon Edwards]

It's perfect as it is :)