Take my hand - Run with me !

Come take my hand.. step into my world ..Lets see our footprints in the sand !

Come step into my world

Just take a quick peep

I sometimes ponder

Is it totally mystique?

 

Come just take a glimpse

Candles, incense, rose petiole

Hiding behind cascading water falls

Dare I breathe more? Ameliorate!

 

Then run barefoot in the fine sand

Lay here awhile, sun on our faces

Can you see the fluffy white clouds?

Perfectly set in the transparent sky

 

A breeze is slightly distracting

Close your eyes lets imagine

Listen, to the whirling of the sea

Pure tranquility, anticipation

 

Take my hand, just once

Run with me, let’s imagine

Turn and see our footprints

Etched in the sand of life.

 

 

Reviews

[RaspberryBullets]

The last verse, oh so good. I love it, excellent work. :) xox

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thanks appreciate your review x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow Ruth like the poem a lot but LOVE the final stanza:
'Take my hand, just once
Run with me, let’s imagine
Turn and see our footprints
Etched in the sand of life.'
A thing we have all thought!

[Bewitching Sensations]

You are so kind John x x Have a great day

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Something wrong with WC only got this response today! You too.

[Bewitching Sensations]

xx

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Just had anothe three four month old review comments from you today.This site has some quirks lol. Hope you are good.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Yes its annoying does the same for me.. or it doesnt let me know when some reviews come through.. until i so happen to read the poem and there it is :(... Im holding up thanks x x

[Stanley Wilson]

beautiful poem really enjoyed it flowed really well

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou Stanley x

[An owl on the moon]

In paths of bliss you breathe out such beautiful reflections of a world where two become one... A moving beckoning...

[Bewitching Sensations]

thank you .. :)