Intoxicating Desire

fear of the unknown as two souls become one

Look deep into her eyes

When that moment comes

The two are becoming one

Taking it to another level

 

Once tasted of the honey

It will become intoxicating

That moment, never the same

You will find it fixating

 

As it continues to enfold

Fear may set in, as you soar

Are you willing to take that step?

You will come back for more

 

Many have never tasted

Or stepped into the mind.

Where two can live their dream

You will be shocked to find

 

 

Reviews

[R J Askew]

'Taking it to another level' ... I recognise and like this awareness of how important commitment is, in most of the things we value. And yes things may become intoxicating, as you say, which can be good and bad. But, as you say in the last verse, many never find out and it is their loss.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou x

[R J Askew]

great to hear from you again .. still writing?

[Bewitching Sensations]

Yes.. been a few years.. just started again, im a bit rusty though :(.. How have you been?

[kayakerandcamper]

Absolutely love this, could of been written for us, yes I am ready to take the step xxx

[Michael of Gilead]

Lovely

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou lovely x

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice description leading the reader to a good place. Some taste become a addiction. No weakness in this amazing poem. A perfect ending to the poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thank you Coyote :)))

[Mark]

Something innate in being human that makes us want to pair up, despite the fear.

I liked this poem, and the last stanza is particularly powerful.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou so much for your kind review :)

[Chris]

Innocence past...

There are so many, many people in the world to have been immaculately conceived if one believes in -- such innocence.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou for your review... Its a bit of a taboo subject i think

[Art]

and that's how love is...intoxicating


nice work on this poem....

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou Art Sun x

[An owl on the moon]

An enchanted write... the feeling that overwhelms the mind and heart... wakes one in dead of night in breathless wonder... Your words express so well that intoxicating magic I knew once...

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou Craig i hope you feel it again one day.. I am sure you will :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

I really like this poem but was disappointed when it finished so quickly four more verses please. :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou i will do :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is the moment of true cuming when it becomes more than release and becomes a flow of a soul into another. After that everything is joy and when you think of the person or see them it is like they have your heart cupped in their hands.

[Bewitching Sensations]

I agree it is totaly on another level ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

At this level it should be love and devotion to one another.

[MoriartyMesa]

There is the sweet smell of what folk in Georgia would call "Sweet Summer Rain", very charming.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou so much for your review x

[MoriartyMesa]

Now is it bad that music wise it reminded me off http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FA5jsa1lR9c

[Bewitching Sensations]

ahhhh not the spice girls surely lol :)

[MoriartyMesa]

Yea im old

[Bewitching Sensations]

my lips are sealed ;)))