Why so Lost?

My first attempt at a kyrielle.

With a deep passion in my heart,

I wish to the Heaven's above.

I speak with words, the purest art,

Will I ever find, that one to love?

I've met the one, for this I'm sure,

Her presence, divine as a dove.

My lust, an illness with no cure,

Will I ever find, that one to love?

Alone I lay, many a nights,

My love, her denial thereof.

Here I'll stay, under the moonlight,

Will I ever find, that one to love?

It's mine to give, my warm embrace.

I't mine to give, yet here you shove,

You throw it all back in my face.

Will I ever find, that one to love?

 

 

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Michael X]

This reminds me of Poe, has the same lyrical intention and flow of Annabelle Lee, great work,
also reminds of the classics of the 18th in form and balance of a natural sonnet, to crave and want,
to desire what the heart sees as heaven, with a light, subtle spellbound captivation of
seeking the one true love, I'm sure this will make any women's heart flutter with the natural romantic
ambience that laces the meaning in a woven, detailed way, Brillaintly done, thanks for being Poet

[Fran Marie]

I have to say this was a very well crafted Kyrielle for a first attempt

at this interesting form~ perhaps some white space between each

of the 4 stanzas would make this form stand out more in presentation
~ Excellent pen my friend

Fran marie

[Emilee Grimm]

I loved this!! I always wonder...actually, more like worry that I won't ever find anyone, too!! This was so beautifully written and lyrical.... I enjoyed it very much :).

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this was really good i liked it ^.^

[It'sLexiB47]

great write
tons of emotion that i've definatly felt recently
this spoke to me ALOT
you are a very great writer
i cant wait to read your next piece
-Alexis

[man Atek]

Will I ever find, that one to love?

wow, you are very existing
and make me find inspiring, TQ.
sep Jez !