Nightmare Savior

Nightmare Savior

A Poem by Rachael
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pretty short... couldn't think of anything else to add.

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In the middle of my nightmare you showed up and made my fears disappear

The monsters saw your face and the power inside…

You stood up for me and let me hide behind

A fierce battle it was but there was no doubt at the victor.

You came out with a blood soaked sword and a grin.

We rejoiced with a fairy tale kiss…

yet the monsters came back and stole you away from me.

Forever. Gone.

© 2010 Rachael


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What da heck? You stole my breath away. I haven't had a reaction like that in a while. It's sad. Just when there was that light at the end of the tunnel....

>Wham< I got hit by a train I never saw coming.

lol....Shame on you...shame on you.

I was so happy at the end of the story...then the happy ending turned tragic. I had invested so much into the ending I assumed I was going to get. I guess its no ones fault but my own. Nice story.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A fairy tale with a sad ending. A very good poem. Like real life never a good ending? I like this poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What da heck? You stole my breath away. I haven't had a reaction like that in a while. It's sad. Just when there was that light at the end of the tunnel....

>Wham< I got hit by a train I never saw coming.

lol....Shame on you...shame on you.

I was so happy at the end of the story...then the happy ending turned tragic. I had invested so much into the ending I assumed I was going to get. I guess its no ones fault but my own. Nice story.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh darn! I was hoping that he would sweep you off of your feet and take you away to his castle but instead he was monster food.
But this is really cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well written,
why always the sad endings?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Such powerful words, and sad really,
well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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