Olden

Olden

A Poem by Rachael
"

Didn't really go where I wanted it to. But that's ok.

"

Take it back to the old times.

Back when nothing you are looking at in this moment existed.

 

Bring me back to the time we now call simple.

Tell me how it worked, allow me to live then.

 

Times were anything but simple; but this world does not know that.

Allow me to experience it.

 

Feel things in the flesh. Let me understand.

© 2010 Rachael


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You certainly dug deep on this poem. I like how you've questioned reality.
Its cool how you have this time traveling vibe. My favorite thing is the
adventurous spirit. This poem doesnt not have many descriptive words,
but somehow stimulates many senses.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I agree with the poem. Life should be feeling with our hands. Accomplishing thing with our body. Not wasting away dreaming or playing a video game. Each of us need to test life and see where we land. A outstanding short poem. You made me think.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


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hmm
Powerful words here, quite deep.

Posted 9 Years Ago


yea i kinda want to go back to the time of the industrial revolution just so that i can understand wtf whelan is talking about. but that probably wouldnt be simple at all. no actually i take that back, i would probably be the queen of....germany so i would have servants to do my work. yup. but seriously rachael, how do you come up with this stuff. i swear sometimes you act like you are way older than you are. stop thinkning so much! haha just kidding. love you

Posted 10 Years Ago


well done

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a curious mind and lots of intrigue.

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Short and meaningful.
Nice expression.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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What a beautiful longing for the past... a more childlike time perhaps, when things seemed so simple.. so peaceful... so free... It's a longing so many of us can relate too when the world crashes down around us... Wonderfully expressed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Interesting I really enjoyed this.

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Ian
This poem should be seen all over "Take it back to the old times.Back when nothing you are looking at in this moment existed. that is my favorite line because if you go back you realize some of the things we have now wouldnt be there so we should be greatful


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You certainly dug deep on this poem. I like how you've questioned reality.
Its cool how you have this time traveling vibe. My favorite thing is the
adventurous spirit. This poem doesnt not have many descriptive words,
but somehow stimulates many senses.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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