Depressed Flea

Depressed Flea

A Poem by sabinn
"

People just tell us to speak up, don't suffocate with in. But don't act like you care when you actually don't.

"
Hold your breath for 10 sec,
Now, Breathe!!!
let your nostrils feel the flow of air with in.

Let me ask you, how you feel,
But let me tell, how we feel.

Hundreds of dagger penetrating through the skin,
Breathing isn't easy, suffocation is only we feel.

It's easy to say, I am there for you,
But are you really ?

How a day in a week the breakdown takes place?
Do you know what happens in those days?

How the devil recites it's name?
Every thoughts and every picture is nothing but just a pain.

To be true I opened up to few,
May be one or two.

The answer were why do you feel the way you do,
Or you are just a coward to make yourself feel the way you do.

As if it's something we can control,
Trust me if we could, we want it no more.


We just need a shoulder to trust, where our head can lean,
Just a ear that truly want to hear.

You just hear, I know you won't feel,
The pain we do.

It's just a joke later to other Million ears,
So it's better to keep it hidden and clean.

It's easier to suffocate ,
Then to be judged by million advocates.

For some the pain just exceed,
It's easier to be dead than to feel.

It's easy to say, to share how you feel,
But what if the sharing leads you to the death scene of a depressed flea.

© 2020 sabinn


Author's Note

sabinn
I don't know what you think, but don't act like you care when you actually don't.

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I hate adulterated sympathy. Millions of souls like him are and were suffocating out there but we've made the word depression flow in mainstream so much that it sounds like mild air to us. Unapologetically, depressed minds don't bell the drums of their uncanny feelings, someone is to find it out from their stillness. I can understand your gratitude to the lost soul and initiative towards genuine care Sabin. Thanks truly☆


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

1 Month Ago

I believe people just post on social media, as if they care when actually they dont, for all those w.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Few words and images that won't get anything back, yet they stick to it. You are welcome🍀🌸
sabinn

1 Month Ago

Yup. 😊😊❤️



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Acting like you care, when you don't is hypocrisy. Depression is horrible. People who have never experienced it, will never understand how debilitating it can be. It takes guts to reach out. You want genuine people to listen, not those who are false. I would say persevere. Don:t hold back and suffocate within. There are those out there who want to listen and who do care. You just have to find them. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

1 Month Ago

Yes people don't understand how it feels and they majority take this in a minor way . Thank you so m.. read more
A silence voice mean, you excepted the world around you.
"It's easy to say, to share how you feel,
But what if the sharing leads you to the death scene of a depressed flea."
A depressed flea, we cannot be. Better to write, to scream or to create things to make our world better. Powerful words written, you made me think this morning.
Coyote

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

1 Month Ago

Only if people could understand others pain the world would be a nicer place, thanks you so much for.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are right and you are welcome. Most people can't see beyond their own life.
I hate adulterated sympathy. Millions of souls like him are and were suffocating out there but we've made the word depression flow in mainstream so much that it sounds like mild air to us. Unapologetically, depressed minds don't bell the drums of their uncanny feelings, someone is to find it out from their stillness. I can understand your gratitude to the lost soul and initiative towards genuine care Sabin. Thanks truly☆


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

1 Month Ago

I believe people just post on social media, as if they care when actually they dont, for all those w.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Few words and images that won't get anything back, yet they stick to it. You are welcome🍀🌸
sabinn

1 Month Ago

Yup. 😊😊❤️

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Kathmandu, Nepal



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