Is it all natural?

Is it all natural?

A Poem by sabinn
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To the mistaken thoughts and to the unkowns

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Sometimes we miss,
Sometimes we are mess.
The memories,
Let be good or bad.

The moment is missed,
The feeling feels times and again,
The path that's been chosen,
Or the path been forced.

The life of the sweetness,
The life that was sour .
The unheard screams,
The unseen pain.

Well is it all natural??
Or the path chosen wrong.
The feeling that were not felt,
Or the understood that was misunderstood.

Is it all natural?
Or may be thats where we are imperfect,
May be humans are imperfect,
The imperfects in search of perfects.

Is it all natural?
Or may be we just want to fill the void,
Or may be we just want to point others.
For good or the bad just blame the others.

Oh the unanswered, is it all natural?

© 2020 sabinn


Author's Note

sabinn
Do tell me how you felt after you read 😊

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You question many things Sabinn.
"Is it all natural?
Or may be thats where we are imperfect,
May be humans are imperfect,
The imperfects in search of perfects"
I liked and I agree with the above lines. Our imperfections make us different and special. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

3 Years Ago

Our imperfection is the real we .
Thank you so much for reading 😊
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I agree my friend and you are welcome.



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You question many things Sabinn.
"Is it all natural?
Or may be thats where we are imperfect,
May be humans are imperfect,
The imperfects in search of perfects"
I liked and I agree with the above lines. Our imperfections make us different and special. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

3 Years Ago

Our imperfection is the real we .
Thank you so much for reading 😊
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I agree my friend and you are welcome.
Life is a journey. We don't know at the outset where it will lead us. There will always be positives and negatives on the way. We have to learn to deal with that. I like the posted image you gave chosen to accompany your lines.

Chris



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sabinn

3 Years Ago

Yes the journey to know who we truly are.
Thank you so much 😊

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Kathmandu, Nepal



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