I don't need you

I don't need you

A by sadjgrey

i don't need you,
don't need you anymore
i don't care you don't care
i'm all alone just like before

you don't care
i don't care
i'm over you just leave me already
won't you make this easy just go away
i don't need you you or anyone but me
i'll just be living in my own world
where i don't breath i won't cry i will die
i'm ok i don't feel anything but i'm alive

i can't seem to erase you from these memories
haunting me from the inside
take a look to my face and know this pain you've cause
and i don't ever need you but i want you
are you happy to be here?
i'll fall into your lies
fall into your life
but don't forget i'm still here i'm so blind
can you even save me or will u just stand by

i loved you from the very first night
i'll love you till the dead of night
i loved you from the very first sight
i'll love you till the dead of time

now i am alone
you are fake you arn't alone
you are afraid to know what you done
well just look closer to see this pain you've cause
are you happy to be here now i stand alone
forgetting the things you did to me are you happy to be here?
here with out me you will never be anything to me
move closer to me and know you are ok

i'm ok i won't cry for you
i'm ok i won't die for you
i'm ok i wont betray you

 

© 2009 sadjgrey


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yes, you could definitely feel the emotion throughout. there may have been some spelling and grammar issues but they were easy enough to ignore. this cut deep, nice job on it

Posted 13 Years Ago


i'm ok i won't cry for you
i'm ok i won't die for you
i'm ok i wont betray you

This is a wonderful song here, flows wonderful,
I love these last lines here, wonderful write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Heartbreak suuuuuuuuuuucks! :[ I sowwie. So... break up... you were hurting... you moved on... and did mind games start? Or did she try to come back? I am a bit confused... or maybe I'm just reading too into it. I wish I could hear it how it sounds in your head.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very very deep and real...Nice piece of writing...I'm sorry that you had to feel heartache like this though...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I love this peom! So deep and real.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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sadjgrey
sadjgrey

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