Very best part of me

every where i turn your all i see an image stuck in my head im trying so hard to
move past all those things you did but not loving you is harder than you know
so ill put my head down close my eyes and lie to everyone and pretend im ok
hide all this pain inside or let it go before i die

say is that rain or are they tears
you told me to go now im all alone
but if i had to do it again id leave everything for you
dnt forget the very best thing about me is you
im trying my best to let you go before i die
but not loving you is the hardest thing ive had to do
this emptyness inside is killing me eating me alive


look into my clouded eyes,you are the kind of girl that makes me fall in love
and now your wishing you meant something to someone else but not loving you is harder than you know
unable to stand on my own feet now crawling around through this life


say is that rain or are they tears
you told me to go now im gone
but if i had to do it again id waste my heart on you all over
dnt forget the very best thing about me is you
im trying my best to let you go before i die
but not loving you is the hardest thing ive had to do
this emptyness inside is killing me eating me alive
and the very best part of me is you

we could've lived this life together now its just another wasted chance
ive waited so long for you and now i wonder if anything could be that good again
hide all this pain inside or let it go before i die
all i ever really wanted was to be loved but now i need someone to help me breathe
say is that rain or are they tears falling dow your face again
and the very best part of me is you


 

Reviews

[Jade Mayhew]

The more of your writing I read, the more I absolutely fall in love with it. You can tell that your writing comes from the heart, and even if it made sense to you, and only you, the fact that there is so much emotion and passion in your writing makes is so incredible. I'm definitely getting a heartbroken vibe from this poem (song?), and I know how it feels. I could relate to quite a few of the lines. Amazing job! Keep writing! You're so insanely talented!!! *~Jade mayhew~*

[Lizanne]

This is an emotional work of how one feels after losing the one they love. Rain and tears are so very much the same. The pain of heaven rains down upon us and the pain of the heart creates raining tears of lose.
You wield a very creative and talented pen. Could find this very pleasing to the ear as a song.

[deeps]

A very relatable write here, Ilike these lyrics alot.
Very well written, nice flow.