If only you knew....

I wonder if you know...

If you can tell...

do you?

 

Do you know that I still care?

Do you know that I never stopped?

Do you know that?

 

I wonder if you realize how much I cared

I wonder if you know that I honestly loved you

I wonder if you know that seeing you sad kills me

 

I wonder if you ever think of me

I wonder if my face ever crosses your mind

I wonder if you still care

 

Do you know....

That when your hurt I am hurting as well

Do you know...

That seeing you depressed makes me depressed

Do you know...

That my affection for you hasn't died

Do you know....

 

I wish you knew...

That your face is always in my mind

I wish you knew...

That your voice is a song in my ears

I wish you knew...

Your smile lights up my world

I wish you knew....

 

I was hurt....But I healed

I cried...but my tears dried

I was sad...But I was lifted up

And now what....

 

I don't know...If only you knew...

Author's Note

This is an older poem which I wrote a while back I am just curious to know what u think

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

This is sad... I can take sad poetry though. The thing is when a person leans too much on another they lose power, self esteem, and their worth just sinks down into a hole. Easily manipulated by that one person they look to as the wall to hold them up. Listen to "Opiate" by Tool. Just that the example in that song is religion.

[Rikkevi Rue]

incredibly deep...this just speaks of the heart and the soul...the emotion is surging across the scene...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is a great poem, showing how one wishes the other knew how they felt!

[*skittlez*]

sarah i really love this poem brings meories back but it is really really good

[Brook Hughes]

I love the repitition in this poem. For example where you go "I wish you knew"
Keep writing.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Old memories need to be refreshed in order to inject new happiness, new pain...!!!

Good one..!!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

"when your hurt I am hurting as well"....I'd change "your" to "you're" here for correct usage. This was a thoughtful and introspective piece of writing.

[KAREN]

EXCELLENT, HEART FELT, Emotions and pain can be felt!

[Jeff]

Another good piece. Very deep and thought-provoking.

[Eternal.Dreamer]

do you know...I wish you knew...if you only knew...
we often want to say some things to a certain person, but sometimes they don't deserve to hear what we have to say.
you expressed your thoughts beautifully...very good poem.