My perfect kiss

My perfect kiss

A Poem by sarah

We walked slowly in the mist of the night
We held hands
His sweet eyes gazed down at me
My heart skipped a beat

We slowly strolled down the lane
The Christmas lights glittered brightly
All the way down the lane
There were bright lights

As we walked he stopped
And paused for a moment
Our hands were still intertwined
He smiled at me

I gazed up at him
Curious as to what he was doing
All of a sudden he pulled me close to his body
He wrapped his arms around my waist

And for a moment
He just stared at me
Like he was taking a picture with his mind
He moved some hair out of my face

Then he bent down
And sweetly pressed his lips against mine
A cold breeze blew through
But neither one of us felt it

His kiss was sweet
Tender
But full of passion
And romance

It started to rain gently
But neither of us cared
I ran my fingers through his hair
He gently lifted me slightly off the ground

But then all of a sudden
Something happened
Something I hadn't expected
Something terrible
I woke up

Alone....

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I have never been kissed and I am 17 *sigh* but this is how I picture my first kiss. I hope it happens just like this :-) hey a girl can dream right! haha

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this is so beautifully touching and sweetly romantic that i was in the moment and feeling your emotion. sweet 16 and never been kissed, it will come along. prince charming is out there somewhere and he will ride up on his white stallion and sweep you off your feet. what a lovely poem !

Posted 10 Years Ago


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The lovely poem rolls for a year now.
Sixty four individuals reviewed.
All highly appreciated the piece.
You have chosen the most sacred time for embarking upon a new life.

"We slowly strolled down the lane
The Christmas lights glittered brightly
All the way down the lane
There were bright lights"

Hope your life can embrace pure,sacred and happy events.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem so pretty

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write, friend. I can relate to the longing, and the wait is worth it for your first kiss. :) I noticed that this poem was posted awhile ago, but had to read it when I found it. Very lovely and the imagery is magically vivid. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A tender moment and a surprise ending, made for good reading. PS

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your man is somewhere out there. He's looking for you ;) Amazing poem by the way; I've had a "perfect first kiss" dream as well. Nothing wrong with that :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The best I can do is say, your work made me remember when I was a young fella and meeting that one person. Your work also inspired the following tribute.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBEXSiFzOfU&feature=colike

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A funny well writen romantic poem.Good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is luminescence-a dream of the heart.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is romance Sarah, beautifully, heartfelt, touching and so pure...
A dream to never forget ~ Lovely write! I liked it a lot :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Oh sarah..I was so with you in this one..and you ended it like that??? LOL

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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