It's amazing

It's amazing

A Poem by sarah

It's amazing
What a simple touch can do
How much it can mean to someone

It is amazing
How much a kiss on the cheek can mean
To a broken heart

When we cry
All we want
Is to be held

We want to be touched
Held closely
Loved

The simplest touch
Could lift a persons spirits
Make them forget the pain for a moment

It's amazing
What a simple touch can do
How much it can change a person

We all want to be touched
We want someone to hold our hands
We want someone to care

It truly is amazing
What touch can do 

© 2010 sarah


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You're right - something really simple like a hug can move someone.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, but quite incontestably true.
Your style suits your subject.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words are true. A simple kiss can make us content. A beautiful and positive poem. Love and friendship is what we need. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel the same way. This makes me think of someone :).

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is so true. I like this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice and true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and so true just a tiny touch, a gesture of love!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, mortal! Not many people take into account hope important touch really is. They often think it's bad and a lot of people shy away from it when, really, it can actually mean a lot. Love this, very sweet indeed, good job. Farewell, mortal~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How very true Sarah. Touch is an amazingly powerful thing, and can mean so much. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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