Moment of peace

Moment of peace

A Poem by sarah

Sometimes I take a moment
A single moment
To really think

I sit in silence
I let myself breath easy
I try to clear my head

I listen to the gentle thump of my heart
I listen to the sounds around me
I watch the rain drip off the roof

In that single moment
The world stops
Everything around me stops

The constant talking
The never ending nagging
All the noise

It all stops....

In that single moment
My world pauses
And I get a single second of peace

I treasure that moment
Because it is my moment
Of peace 

© 2010 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
Just something I was thinking about

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The pauses and clarity in this is amazing. I've favourited it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice poem. The pace of the poem I liked. The few moments of peace is necessary to keep us sane.A outstanding poem.
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely. We all need this

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this Sarah. So calming to read too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow you've written really well here. hasn't inner peace always been something we have been searching for? you've captured its essence perfectly here. awesome!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very calm and soothing poem.. nice!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A lot of people get that moment of peace and when they do it is the moment that they will remember forever. Great poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem. How peaceful

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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"I treasure that moment
Because it is my moment
Of peace"
~~we all need that moment of tranquility-great poem !

:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetic, sentimental, passionate, sensual, simply...real.

This is your best...it is from the heart...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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