He cared when no one else did

He cared when no one else did

A Poem by sarah

Your so good to me
So sweet
So kind

But I always over look you

You always make me feel good
You always make me smile
You are so good

But I always walk right on past you

You have always been there
Always with a smile on your face
You have always waited for me

But I never notice

You watched as I had my heart broken
You were there
Waiting to comfort me

But I walked to someone else

You've been around sense we were children
You have always been such a good friend
You have never disappointing me 

And yet I have never taken the time to thank you

You have cared so much for me
You have always done exactly what I needed you to do
And you simply have always been around

Your too good to me
Too sweet
Too kind

And I have never given you any reason to do so
I have never done anything to deserve any of
The kindness you have shown

Thank you
For simply being around
And caring for me

When no one else did....



© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
This guy have liked me for a REALLY long time and I wrote this for him because he is so sweet and kind, and I have never thanked him for being there when I needed him. Sorry this didn't turn out too great still suffering from writers block :-)

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A wise poem. We need to thank the people who stay with us in the good and bad times. The friends and family who love us for who we are. I like the complete poem. I try to show thankfulness for the good people in my life. In the end. I wished I thanks them more. A outstanding poem with a very good lesson to be learn.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


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I disagree with you, Sarah. I think this is a terrific poem. It really touched me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work..a lovely piece..!!!

Keep Writing..and expressing your feeling, people will appreciate your efforts..!!

Good Luck..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really sweet. Sometimes we don't notice people, good you now have. Well done! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet and straight to the point. Nice write! :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Gave sweet poem! Nice to have friends like that who will be there for you no matter what!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem, just two small errors, which can be overlooked, but for perfection just read over and correct

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a sweet poem! I guess it's better late then never that you realize how much this boy did care for you! He would really love this---
I know the feeling--- feeling like nobody cares but then some guy finally shows us what we're worth and that he cares!!
:) You are such a talented poet!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Line 17 and 19 are messed up a bit. Other then that I love it. I sort of relate to it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's a really good poem.. i think he would like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It is a nice tribute to him.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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