Let me in

Before you leave
Before you forget
Before your gone
Tell me what your thinking

Let me inside your head
What are you feeling?
Do you care?
Or am I alone in thinking that way

Please tell me
Before it's too late
Because I can't tell
Simply by your actions

You twist my mind
Backwards
Forwards
And all the way around

I just want to know
Do you see me
For me?
And do you like what you see?

My heart will break
If you don't care in return
But at least
I'll know

So please
Before you leave
And forget
And leave me behind

Let me inside your heart

Author's Note

The guy I like is leaving this week for school and I can't tell if he likes me back (not like it matters now anyway) But it would be nice to know if he does.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

So sweet.. i like it. =) And awww, i'm sorry that the guy you like is leaving.. but tell him how you feel if you really want to know the answer. ^o^ I know its difficult, i've never been able to tell a guy i really love how i truely feel.. except for like 3 guys.. but love is precious.. treasure it. =) Have faith in yourself! If he rejects you, gah guys are guys, but your such a kind girl you know! You deserve the best! Or like someone suggested, send him this poem! =D

[FallenHeroXx]

Great write! Keep up the good work!

[Linear]

He would be crazy not to.
The poem was sweet, the longing to taste his love, to hear him whisper in your ear those little things you long to hear. :0)

[Sweets]

This is so sweet :)
and I think you should send him this poem :)
It would be really nice to do so!
Great work!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Good write actually no need to explain he will realise........love is sucha a thing.

[tynamite]

I agree with The Analog Kid. If you can't send the poem now, then you never will. So even if the answer is no, you should send the poem because you'll feel better for it.

[The Analog Kid]

Send him this poem:) And you will get an answer. Nice rhythm and heartfelt.

[prodicallife]

Nice writting
Very simple, transparent feelings so intellectual beautifull


Regards
PRODICAL

[Marie Harrison]

You twist my mind
Backwards
Forwards
And all the way around

Nice!

[Audrey Howitt]

Such heartfelt words! I can feel your emotion in every line! Well done!