A lovers destiney

A great night with a great girl who broke my heart. not to long after this poem was written to have loved and lost? yeah what the f**k ever

My hands love to paint pictures of sensual sensations along your body.

sensual sensations, and I can tell the touch lingers by the condesation your getting from these

microphone vibrations

 

My poetic princess

 

I would love to dance the dance of a lovers destiney

us interwined like words with rhyme, pieces of puzzle

the way you nuzzle your forehead to my shoulder

 

the way your thighs press against my hips, and your lips

your lips remind me to be religious because i have to continue to thank god

for finding lips that are perfect against mine.

 

You remain to be my one in a few, but best believin, i found my garden of eden,

when im inside you

 

stop, go, slower, baby slower, slower. yes, yes

faster, harder, I wanna feel every inch of you

kiss me, tease me, nibble my earlobe,

Love me tenderly

but not too tenderly

love me so good that i dont walk right tommorrow but not hard enought to wear it hurts

 

See you may think this sex exploitation

and it is to a degree, but she could get me off through plain and simple conversation.

 

My rose among weeds is she, and after the hours of love making

the way you sleep

 

the very gooddess like outline of your body to the disorienated sheets of my bed

make me realize.

 

That a hopless romantic am I

To want nothing more than to dance and kiss you in the rain.

 

The girl with a key to a soliders heart of stone.

 

So much that i wrote this while you where sleeping....

Author's Note

ignore grammar like always i was not in the mood to pay attention to that

Reviews

[KEENAMARiE]

SPEECHLESS..The girl with a key to a soliders heart of stone. she's a lucky girl to have someone as passionate as you. But some of this sounds familiar..hmmm. great piece.

[emz]

this is lovely... very erotic, i like the way the writer is totally unabashedly honest about how he feels..
My rose amongst weeds is she... what a beautiful line.

ahhhhh to feel that kind of love again.

x

[Astrid Hamilton]

...This poem is so beautifully erotic in a sensual way whispering minimally that same eroticism to awaken the senses of my soul, longing and yearning for the lovemaking between a man and a woman who were made and twined and meant for each other,
Nothing is more perfect than love,
and the vision you create of such sweet desire not hidden
is why my eyes are as open as my heart has always been;

(so I like and appreciate very much the reference- symbolic application, of the key.)

[Haleemaaisha]

Ahhhh This is whats up. I have butterflies in my tummy!