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the lady , brain

the lady , brain

A Poem by sakshi arora
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i have written this poem about our brain but personified as as a woman

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This lady, brain' job is  to always look gorgeous

afterall she is the brand embassador of my existence 


But

This brain jams when given ample rest

Oh god, she grows a nasty flab

o:p>

The brain needs workout

To maintain the curves and attract the crowd

 

Once she stops gymming

She eats all crap

Containing high Trans fat

 

People then call her a fool

demotivating her to the extent 


that thenshe pouts  and over dresses unnecessarily

People taking it as a gaudy accessory

and mock her for her fashion sense 

 

 

 

So better be a strict boss and command  the brain to  workout regularly

And let her retain her glamour 

So the world may clamor

For her beauty and

Then she will always be on her duty

Wisely.

. And your brand will become a succesful tycoon

 

 

 

 

© 2015 sakshi arora


Author's Note

sakshi arora
honest comments please :)

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my honest comment is that i love the personification...and also the idea that the brain is beautiful...and women can be most sexy because of their brains moreso than physical looks...

there is definitely a poem here now. i am looking forward now to the newest Disney animated movie..."Brain and the Beast"---

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank u sir :)



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cool write, interesting. Nicely penned

Posted 6 Years Ago


Indeed, the brain needs regular workouts too. In fact, more so, keeping in tandem with today's competitive world where the rules of the game change in minutes. So what choices does a woman have? More so, when being clever is also about being cool and...SEXY!!!

A great comment from you in very nicely packaged poetry, my compliments, Sakshi!

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thanks for the appreciation :)
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome. It's a pleasure to get acquainted with your writing.
Very wise and clever efforts to talk about the brain.
Yes you have nicely pointed out the functions of the human brain and shared precious suggestions for maintaining the brain for proper performance.
It is a special work which shows how a poet can inspire people about good practices.
Thank you Sakshi for the lovely work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot sir
zainul

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome,dear friend.
But

This brain jams when given ample rest

Oh god, it grows a nasty flab

She is not blessed and has a poor metabolism

The brain needs workout

I loved those truth expressed in the form of poetry :)

Keep up the good work dear :)
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Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thanks a lot sir
Anand Sehgal

6 Years Ago

you are welcome dear :) pen on :)
"let her retain her glamour
So the world may clamor
For her beauty and
Then she will always be on her duty"

A beautiful and smart woman for some men is doubly splendid. A wonderful write...:)..................

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank u for ur gracious words
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)...................
Sharp and smart write and was enjoyable read!

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank u so much
A. Amos

6 Years Ago

You're most welcome
my honest comment is that i love the personification...and also the idea that the brain is beautiful...and women can be most sexy because of their brains moreso than physical looks...

there is definitely a poem here now. i am looking forward now to the newest Disney animated movie..."Brain and the Beast"---

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank u sir :)
Personification as a tool can be used for highly effective purposes. I liked the overall humorous tone of the poem, and the suggestion for all of us to use our brains. But as a doctor, I just can't get over the "poor metabolism" part. The brain has one of the highest rates of metabolism in the body. But let me stop being pedantic, and see this poem for what it is - a playful comment on the value of exercising our brains regularly :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank you sir :)
there is no poem here....

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

oops yeah i l repost ;

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sakshi arora

new delhi, new delhi, India



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i am an optimistic girl who loves her hobbies. i respect knowledge.i will appreciate honest comments.please don't send me read requests of stories and books as they don't interest me much more..

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