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A Poem by sakshi arora
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all clouds have gathered

planets have  decorated the milky way

as today is sun's birthday

 

Sirius has sent a blessing letter

moon has cooked sun' favorite eclipse

 

the sun is a year older today

shining even brighter and wiser

as has a cherry on his cake

experience flavored

 his mistress earth has secretly made love with him

and that's what he rejoice like a sacred hymn

 

the celebration has begun

with great pomp and show

 

the sun is the hero

decked up with royal  cold spot

  

the  big day ends and the sun sleeps  again

the moon as usual shows unconditional love  

and stays  awake all night to guard her vermilion 

from the evil eyes of the cuckolding earth

 

 

© 2015 sakshi arora


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This is a well written and entertaining poem for your reader. I like your point of view. ~Sharon

Posted 5 Years Ago


sakshi arora

5 Years Ago

thank u ma'am
Miss Sharon

5 Years Ago

You are most welcome! ~S
A nice and well - written poem friend. While reading your poem I somewhat felt the essence of Universe.Keep writing the same way.Awaited for your reply and reviews , SSA.


Posted 5 Years Ago


you depicted the universe in a unique way.... a light read.... good one

Posted 5 Years Ago


This was fun to read :) I read it to my fiancé and she really liked it too. We both agree it's very whimsical. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank u so much and it really made me feel special that u both liked it :)
I love the personification of the sun in this piece. It's lovely and whimsical. I enjoyed reading it, it made me feel happy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thank u it means a lot :)
A very unusual ode to an astronomical event. This poem reminded me of the summer solstice, a time to celebrate the full glory of the sun. Conjuring images of the earth as the sun's mistress was something new and unique. Way to go Sakshi!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sakshi arora

6 Years Ago

thanlk you :)
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome Sakshi :)

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sakshi arora
sakshi arora

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