Vampires fix

Vampires fix

A Poem by Winchester Saltgunner

It's flowing out so warm and thick,
Into the mouth of the monster,
It's better than cocaine,
More addicting than heroin,
Lasts longer than vicodine
The blood of the beautiful ones
Fill them like air fills the lungs

© 2013 Winchester Saltgunner


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Fabulous - really enimates the reality of drinking!

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

Ikr lol thx
Pretty good, though you should probably put your things through a spell check for clarity- heroine is spelled heroin, and vikidine is spelled Vicodin (if that's even what you meant)
Hope that helps!

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

Thx it does help
I love it. I love anything to do with vampires, as long as they don't sparkle in the sunlight.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

aww kewl me to
Nice..... i just love vampires!!! I also have a top " Edward bite me " xD

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

lol i love em 2 i love edward cullin
DarkDaughter

11 Years Ago

xaxa :0 I prefer the book character but Edward Pattison is not bad at all. :p Cristen Steward sucks .. read more
Winchester Saltgunner

11 Years Ago

I think she is hot lol
Awesome

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Winchester Saltgunner
Winchester Saltgunner

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