Stomp Me Out

You threw me away like a half-finished cigarette you didn't have time to finish

Because each one cuts 11 minutes off your life

And I wasn't worth the habit

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A cigarette and love. Rough way to treat love. You said enough in the words. Thank you Samantha for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Paul Bell]

Sort of just gave up smoking there.
Straight to the point. Love it.

[John Stussy]

Ouch. You've crafted a razor of a poem here, I'd feel like utter garbage if I was the target of this dart. Biting and succinct. I'm sorry you had to go through that.

[Nicholas Shea]

This is so cold and to the point, wonderfully fitting for the content!! Well done!!!!