Oh, my son! never give up.....

Oh, my son! never give up.....

A Poem by Akki
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This poem is based on a boy who loses his first running race. So he thinks to give up but, his father encouraged him to never give up.

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Oh, my son! Never give up 

Oh, my son! Never give up 
don’t lose your hope
there are so many people 
in a race to win that golden cup 

I know it’s not easy to gain 
don’t take back your step
you have to run a lot
you have to go into a pain

You have to compete with others
it’s a part of this game 
Show your strength to them
don’t care all they are strangers

They try to lose your confidence
 and they did that anything
to gives you defeat
but, don’t lose your self-confidence 

So many problems coming in your way
but, you have to run
as possible as you can
that time, problems also stay away 

Don’t care about anything
don’t think you are not able
I know you my son
you can do it everything

Time has comes now 
to show them what you are?
Perform like a champion 
remember this, it’s only your single show

Forget everything 
your pain, your sorrow
that thing felt you bad
you can do it, remember only this thing

Race began again with a golden cup
everyone did their best
to win that race
everyone won this mighty cup

Son wants his father feels proud of him
he has to win anyhow this time 
tears will come in his little eyes
to remember the struggle of his father on  him

Race was so tough 
not so easy
to win that a golden cup
but, this time, the son was ready enough

Until the end of the race
son used his all energy
and he wins and after from all that
he saw that the victory face

Sons make a new story
with the end of the race and
win that victory cup
this was just a starting off his glory

Now, his father feels proud
tears come into eyes of him
to see the happiness on their son’s eyes
they lose their mind into that victory sound

© 2016 Akki


Author's Note

Akki
Moral- "never give up your dreams."

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AWESOME!!!
So well written and true. Really enjoyed this write.
It's quite inspiring.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

2 Years Ago

Thanks Brandie!
Beautiful message described here. Nothing feels better than achieving accomplishments.. except maybe, the joy of seeing your son succeed. I love that line " they lose their mind into that victory sound. "

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

Yes, I really agree that nothing feels better than achieving accomplishments. Your words gives me ha.. read more
A.marie.speaks

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
I really liked this poem and your main idea...Keep it up and thanks for sharing...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ridi!
I love you idea . this poem gives a great massage to a reader !! .this is a real natural and outstanding poem !!! Thankyou so much for sharing such an outstanding poetry . this shows your love towards your child !!!! 10000000 points

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

Thank you Zunie, I know I am so creative in nature but not as much as you!
because, you are m.. read more
zunie frost

5 Years Ago

hahaha !!! thanks a lot !! and welcome my friend
Akki

5 Years Ago

: ) keep smiling
i truly respect what you have said i cent percent support it
thankyou for this




your frnd
siddhi

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

I know that Sidhi!
thanks for reviewing!

Your Friend,
Akki.
siddhi

5 Years Ago

i have send you some read requests please read them

your frnd
siddhi
Akki

5 Years Ago

Ok Siddhi, I will read... give me just few min.

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Dee
I like the moral of your story to never give up your dreams! Great job Akki!
I especially like these lines of your poem:
Race began again with a golden cup
everyone did their best
to win that race
everyone won this mighty cup


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dee for your kind words!

: )

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Added on January 14, 2016
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Pune, Maharashtra,India., Hindu, India



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