Us

Us

A Poem by S.R.M.
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uncertainty felt in the face of a possible relationship

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"Us" 6-28-2015


I stare at the plain walls of your room

As my fingers absentmindedly trace along your spine

This happens too frequently, I get that familiar feeling

The one where I feel as if I am drowning in my own uncertainty

And taking you down with me


We talk about “us” sometimes, always at your prompting

And it makes me want to crawl inside myself

Rather than confront my true feelings

And think about how I’m not sure

Whether I need someone, or I need you


S.R.M.

© 2015 S.R.M.


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There is a bundle of uncertainty depicted in the poem. well-written.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a nice poem that shows your feelings. It is a problem that many people face, to not want to show how you really feel. The wording was good too.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2015
Last Updated on June 29, 2015
Tags: love, lust, relationship, uncertainty

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S.R.M.
S.R.M.

NY



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College student studying neuroscience. I use this as a way of expressing my feelings, as I've always loved words. Almost exclusively free verse poetry, as I find it easiest to write that way. more..

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