One man's soul

One man's soul

A Book by Stars and Whales


© 2015 Stars and Whales


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Stars and Whales
Thanks for reading! This is in fact an introduction to a novel. Haha...I'm working on several new ideas at once. Thank you for your time, have a great day.

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You are a very impressive writer. I loved this! I look forward to seeing more work from you. Don't sweat getting published too much. Getting published is like turning eighteen. You look forward to it so much, but when it finally happens, it's kind of "eh".

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Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

What do you mean? :) Thank you.



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Wow.... this is long. I'll try to get to all of it, but don't be surprised if I don't.

I'll do my best and give as much feedback as I can!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

Anything helps so much! Thanks
you are and amazing writer. This makes my writing look like a kindergartner wrote it. This is very creative and i love the romance you have going on in the story. keep up the good work :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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well you have another fan for sure your only in high school? keep this up and put what's in your head and in your heart on the page in front of you and i have no doubt you will go somewhere with your words

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Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

That means so much to me! Yes, I'm a freshman. Glad you liked it.
Although I'm more into thriller/suspense type writing, There were some aspects of your story I really liked. For example, I loved the relationship between Lora and SZ and found the dialogue between them very believable. It showed the reader in a subtle way these two have known each other for quite some time and may have even had a relationship at some point? That's what I got from it. The use of description is nice, meaning it wasn't overly done, but just right.

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Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

Thank you! This means a lot!
I have in my reading library for later reading.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are a very impressive writer. I loved this! I look forward to seeing more work from you. Don't sweat getting published too much. Getting published is like turning eighteen. You look forward to it so much, but when it finally happens, it's kind of "eh".

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

What do you mean? :) Thank you.
Give me a minute and I will get back to you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice! I love the details. Keep up the great work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This novel kept my attention which says a lot as I'm not normally into those types of novels. I still can't remember the name of that high school novel. It feels like something a professional would write. Great Job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

1984 by any chance?
Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

I'm a high schooler right now...I'm reading 1984 at the moment in my freshman English Honors class.
This was very good reading. It seems a vivid scene of the future. I was very much entertained and hooked not to mention. I want to encourage you to continue with your craft. You have a lot of potential. I also want to say never give up writing. Sometimes as writers we have doubts about our work. It may be your novel becomes a bestseller, if you will continually write. I wish the best to you.

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Stars and Whales

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I appreciate that!

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