One man's soul

You are a very impressive writer. I loved this! I look forward to seeing more work from you. Don't sweat getting published too much. Getting published is like turning eighteen. You look forward to it so much, but when it finally happens, it's kind of "eh".

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow.... this is long. I'll try to get to all of it, but don't be surprised if I don't.

I'll do my best and give as much feedback as I can!

Posted 8 Years Ago

you are and amazing writer. This makes my writing look like a kindergartner wrote it. This is very creative and i love the romance you have going on in the story. keep up the good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

well you have another fan for sure your only in high school? keep this up and put what's in your head and in your heart on the page in front of you and i have no doubt you will go somewhere with your words

Posted 8 Years Ago

Although I'm more into thriller/suspense type writing, There were some aspects of your story I really liked. For example, I loved the relationship between Lora and SZ and found the dialogue between them very believable. It showed the reader in a subtle way these two have known each other for quite some time and may have even had a relationship at some point? That's what I got from it. The use of description is nice, meaning it wasn't overly done, but just right.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I have in my reading library for later reading.

Posted 8 Years Ago

You are a very impressive writer. I loved this! I look forward to seeing more work from you. Don't sweat getting published too much. Getting published is like turning eighteen. You look forward to it so much, but when it finally happens, it's kind of "eh".

Posted 8 Years Ago

Give me a minute and I will get back to you.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice! I love the details. Keep up the great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This novel kept my attention which says a lot as I'm not normally into those types of novels. I still can't remember the name of that high school novel. It feels like something a professional would write. Great Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This was very good reading. It seems a vivid scene of the future. I was very much entertained and hooked not to mention. I want to encourage you to continue with your craft. You have a lot of potential. I also want to say never give up writing. Sometimes as writers we have doubts about our work. It may be your novel becomes a bestseller, if you will continually write. I wish the best to you.

Posted 8 Years Ago