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What Happened?

What Happened?

A Poem by Samantha Lynn
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I wrote this one a while ago and forgot about it. Wow, my past year as been very suckish lol enjoy xD

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No, you didn’t rip my heart out
That would have been easier on me
But what was that other stuff about?

 

In the beginning, there was no doubt
I knew exactly who I wanted to be
No, you didn’t rip my heart out

 

You had no reason to scream and shout
And showed your true colors as far as I could see
But what was that other stuff about?

 

When you asked that question I said no, all you did was pout.
You acted like I was money and just had to pay your fee.
No, you didn’t rip my heart out.

 

When things got serious, you bombed out
Of my life, and said you were setting me free
But what was that other stuff about?

 

We haven’t talked in weeks, and now I’m filled with doubt.
Now your with her and seem to be happy.
No, you didn’t rip my heart out
But what was that other stuff about?

© 2012 Samantha Lynn


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This is good poetry. I like your thoughts and direction of the poem.
"No, you didn’t rip my heart out
But what was that other stuff about?"
Would be interesting to find out reasons for separation? Maybe it is good we do not know. A nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can feel her confusion and a little bit of hurt, and I loved it because it wasn't 'self-pitying'. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, I really like the emotion in this poem, it's really relatable

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good poetry. I like your thoughts and direction of the poem.
"No, you didn’t rip my heart out
But what was that other stuff about?"
Would be interesting to find out reasons for separation? Maybe it is good we do not know. A nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very personal thats for sure. I belive writiers write best when dealing with issues close to the heart, and I can tell that is true when reading this

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, very good, and I could easily feel your emotion. Which is something I love to feel in someone's writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The repetition makes this memory really stick in my mind, excellent job on that and on giving yourself an emotional outlet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The emotions in this piece were beautiful expressed. Well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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