Perched

Perched to fly off into the unknown...A sad romance poem...

 

Perched/……………..BY Sami Khalil

Perched to fly off into the unknown…A romance poem.

The Poem:

 

The wind stops its whips

The rain halts its drips

The candle burns its tips

The ocean idles its ships

Death tightens its grips

Luck plays its many chips

The joker shares his quips

A lady shows off her hips

The traveler longs for trips

A trace is found on blips

My name perches sadly

on your lethargic lips!

 

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

I love the rhyme here. It's very witty and kept my attention. Nice one :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Shaquana for this lovely review and kind visit...Be blessed...:)...................

[zephyr]

The bird doesn't know a good perch when she finds one. A giggle and a sigh from this one.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Sarah for this good review and sharing. Have a great one...:)...............

[Pryde Foltz]

Wry, whimsical and sad. A perfect romance write;)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously beloved poet. Thank you so much Pryde. Glad you like this. I tried something different...:).............

[Pryde Foltz]

It was playful but still intelligent. I really liked it.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly intelligent one...:).................

[David Scott]

I am smiling. I am not sure why you chose to end this on a down beat, but it changes everything as you do...
I must consider what this poem would be saying if the last lines changed.
My name as sweet as honey
When kissed from your soft lips...
I can dream... ha.
We must start a cause and ban all "lethargic lips". :)
Fun read Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. So glad you like this sarcastic with fun read dear beloved poet. I'm showing some attitude to her if you know what I mean. A form of blaming...lol
Thank you so much for all...Take care...:)............

[BClancy]

Wow, I've never read a poem by you that rhymed. I really liked it, and the crisp sound of all of the 'ips'. Nice poem :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much talented poet with that great series for your visit and sharing...Be blessed...:)..........................

[Trevor Barnett]

I love the rhyme scheme for this piece. It's shame when someone is loved and they take it for granted. A beautiful write Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well spoken. You have nailed it on the head. Glad you like this poem. Take care...:).....................

[Blissful Sin]

art is all i can think of. fantastic job. the artwork is lovely too, i love the colors!! im always happy to stop by ~^^~

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I'm always happy when you do too. Thank you kindly for all...:).................................

[Butch Decatoria]

Love love love this, even in its simplicity holds so much depth and imagery. Bravo.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review. I appreciate it all...Be blessed...:)..................

[M.K. Jawdat]

This is amazing, you're an amazing poet. Beautiful

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you amazing poet for this lovely review. All appreciated...:)................

[DIVYA]

This poem with it's unique rhyming scheme stands out for it's wry acceptance of an uncaring love. A one-sided love can be both funny and cruel at the same time. The bird art is simply beautiful too. Another exquisite work from you Sami. Indeed enjoyed so much!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. So true and well spoken. So glad you like this write and the art work. You are appreciated as your exquisite work...:)....................

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome. I wish you a divine and beautiful weekend! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You too...:)...................