Perfect Solitude

Lyrics to a song to be sung...

              

            Perfect Solitude

                                 By Sami Khalil                          

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I want to invite you

Even if you're uncomfortable

To my perfect solitude.

I want you to relax

Take a deep breath

Mind you this imprisonment

We are being glued.

Would you happen to know

Or have you overlooked

The backgrounds we share

The velvet thoughts

The adverts fading away

Into the hypnotic mood.

Lady of grace

Of brighter mornings

Of mislabeled nights

I want to remake songs

Where everything is

Merely a cover

A muffled substitute.

I want to lead in love

Keeping it low key

Where every prelude 

Is a quiet rendition 

To these two hearts

In perfect gratitude.

I want to invite you

When you are comfortable

To my perfect solitude

To my perfect solitude... 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I was once told that solitude is to be destitute of Love, or the one you love; I was much younger then and I didn't believe. Now, with all these years on my shoulders, I'm a believer..
Now to your profound poetry; the perfect solitude would only be not that, but perfection with the one that makes you whole.... Lovely, and apologies for going off in at tangent

[Moonie]

If I could travel in time, I would like to let my younger self know that love can be felt most perfectly only in solitude...silence beautifies and intensifies the feelings of the heart...In solitude, we find peace, and only in peace can we search for love...
A marvellous write as always, dear sir!

The lines--
"Lady of grace
Of brighter mornings
Of mislabeled nights," are truly beautiful...I enjoy how aesthetically pleasing the whole piece looks, with the charcoal painting... kudos! :))

[Antonio Valentino]

ahhhh... Sami you have really turned into one special writer.. with every poem i read I am becoming more of a fan of your's all over again..

you can feel the passion in your craft, every word painstakingly picked, the format, the graphics, all in unison with each other..

very fine work here my friend.. looking forward to reading more as time goes by..

[Jimmy Yetts]

An elegantly lovely song that is also deeply meaningful.
There are few things more intimate than solitude shared.
Unique and yet decidedly relevant.
Kudos, Sami!

[Ruth]

Gorgeous! The balance felt here was refreshing and inviting Sami, a chance to just be for a while in the light radiated here and the energy felt of being connected to the all...thank you for the gracious pause :)

[boygene borice]

I want to invite you indeed to my perfect solitude.
this is amazingly awesome. I love the flow of your words. They bring out the honest and the sincerity of the persona.

[Farmgirl]

Very fifty shades of grey here with this piece

Haha!

Love it :-)
Would love to see you take this one further :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you so much Farmgirl for this wonderful review and kind words. Glad you like it...:)...............................

[Farmgirl]

Oh I dooooooo!

& would love to see it go even furtj as if your up for a challenge lol


But all in all it's really great!!

I'm just curious of how much more in depth this could travel hehhe

[Silmara McGarry]

Solitude can be at times a wonderful companion, specially when shared with the one you love.

Beautifully written with such soft involving words. Indeed a great song...
Well done ;-)
Sil

[Manu]

This is so warm, Sir :-)
It takes you into a different world where poet is waiting for his beloved to let her have that comfort and peace in his perfect solitude..A soothing piece to read.I like the way this whole piece flows.
A good one, Sir :-)

[Ken Simm.]

Now this poem is a perfect song.
Solitude is not lonely. Solitude is sometimes learning to grow. Here you invite one perfect other to share.
“We live, in fact, in a world starved for solitude, silence, and private: and therefore starved for meditation and true friendship.” C.S Lewis.

[Echoes of Eros]

This song of your soul creates a perfect escape, and who could deny this invitation. The title pulled me here as I have lived in shadows so long, one can forget what light feels like. Thank you, my friend.