Sage And Saga

Sage And Saga

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...

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Sage And Saga/By Sami Khalil

A free verse sonnet. Does not follow any meter. Just my ears.


Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...In the mood for the classics



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Declareth I, declareth to thee manifest love
With runnels of gentle sweat running forth
And countenance of our meandering grace
Pouring of honeyed words,proving a worth.
This whip-lashed susurration never abates
Vividly dreams becometh a master witness
The panoply of resilience and florid enigma
Unsoiling the sunsets of life and its fitness.
Declareth I with veneration and delectation
I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity
Thine beauty filleth mine tremulous heart
By pervading affection, thine own vivacity.
Declareth I whilst surreal skies may conjure
Days ahead when weary would fain treasure.

© 2018 Sami Khalil


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I don't know if it's just me, but I find this erotic. :). Your choice of words are quite intimidating. Just kidding :). But really it's amazing. You give justice to those words. Every line conjures heavy sensation. I am deeply moved.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

4 Months Ago

Hi there. I'm joyed you liked this poem and grateful for your visit. Glad to see you.
A deeply intellectual way you describe romance. Bravo sir.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! THANK YOU SO MUCH AND SO GOOD TO SEE YOU.
please just give this one to my future hubby so it can be his vows hahahah. sounds so deep and intense and powerful and breathtaking. i loved it..totally. sorry late reviews all round have been away for a while but getting through all the requests and i must say..loving the work. may not be able to review each one but be sure, i am loving them all. xx

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! It is all good and understood. Thank you so much for the visit and appreciation and keeping us .. read more
I love this poem of sweet love Sami. Beautiful flow and rhyme and well worth reading. excellent words, my friend....Peter

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

I love your visit and your kind appreciation. I honor you and your friendship.
honeyed words flowing such romantic declarations of timeless treasured love. Enchanting as ever Sami. I love the ending and every inner princess dreams of the day where such promises are uttered by the one who holds her heart and affection.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Such a warm, heartfelt expression of your love.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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how are you doing my old friend? Them's some pretty words you have here.. Shakespeare is taking a peak as he walks by..

glad to see folks keeping this classic form alive, well done Sami



Posted 3 Years Ago


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okay man I'm not trying to be rude but I don't picture anything or feel anything when I read this. I do admire the diction, and formal approach though. I thinks this says more about me though.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Such beautiful and unique words chosen in this piece! Highly recommend reading aloud. The stanzas are so lyrical. This poem is both bitter and sweet, you can feel the words turn to vinegar and honey as you read them. Write more!!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Profound the depth and radiant the beauty.
A wondrous creation which will offer new gifts with each reading.
Amazing...declareth I!


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