Sage And Saga

Sage And Saga/By Sami Khalil

A free verse sonnet. Does not follow any meter. Just my ears.

Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...In the mood for the classics

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Declareth I, declareth to thee manifest love

With runnels of gentle sweat running forth

And countenance of our meandering grace

Pouring of honeyed words,proving a worth.

This whip-lashed susurration never abates

Vividly dreams becometh a master witness

The panoply of resilience and florid enigma

Unsoiling the sunsets of life and its fitness.

Declareth I with veneration and delectation

I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity

Thine beauty filleth mine tremulous heart

By pervading affection, thine own vivacity.

Declareth I whilst surreal skies may conjure

Days ahead when weary would fain treasure.

Reviews

[Chase Dylan]

I must admit when I read your work, I am quite mesmerized by your ability to tie such deep changes in rhyme tone together with such... Sage-like word choice... Beautifully woven, and immensely satisfying to read on an almost carnal level. Masterfully penned...

[Farmgirl]

What a beautiful Sonnet here!

Very antique and fancy heheh

[Ken Simm.]

Romantic and medevial in character. A troubadour song from Occitania in every way..

[MCS]

Beautiful and elegant!
Always a treat visiting here.

[A.r. Bazian]

Another well crafted piece. It is not everyday that I come across this quality of work.
To be honest, I personally was derailed on a few places, but that did not suspend the flow of delight.
Frankly, my writing isn't any better; I've always been more of a reader.
Thank you

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Wow, Sami! A fantastic write!

I am a big fan of the classic Elizabethan style, and your poem has that in spades.

Excellent vocabulary and very romantic in the tradition of a great Shakespeare sonnet.

Very well done!

[Tony Jordan]

A tremulous heart sounds like a condition I'd gladly endure to be in such a loving and timeless union.
Poetry at it's best Sami.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Brings us back to the time of romanticism and ode to Shakespeare. Very gentle, dulcet, and loving.

[Rana]

Loving wisely, one loves everlastingly, isn't that so; of the million shades of love, those that you picked to paint yours in word are of the richest and truest. I admire you style.
"Declareth I with veneration and delectation
I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity"
Splendid :)