Sage And Saga

Sage And Saga

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...

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Sage And Saga/By Sami Khalil

A free verse sonnet. Does not follow any meter. Just my ears.


Romance at any mature age and level of wisdom...In the mood for the classics



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Declareth I, declareth to thee manifest love
With runnels of gentle sweat running forth
And countenance of our meandering grace
Pouring of honeyed words,proving a worth.
This whip-lashed susurration never abates
Vividly dreams becometh a master witness
The panoply of resilience and florid enigma
Unsoiling the sunsets of life and its fitness.
Declareth I with veneration and delectation
I love thee with truest of perplexed sagacity
Thine beauty filleth mine tremulous heart
By pervading affection, thine own vivacity.
Declareth I whilst surreal skies may conjure
Days ahead when weary would fain treasure.

© 2018 Sami Khalil


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Dramatic, and lovely -- in the spirit of the classics.
Minor suggestion -- perhaps the first line was copied in a different font accidentally? This program often does that. Also -- provingly worth, perhaps is simply proving worth, or proving worthy?

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Oh my goodness...your language is so lush, and melodic, Sami. Reading it is like basking in its afterglow. Gorgeous...absolutely!

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The panoply of resilience and florid enigma"

Summoning the essence, the poetic portrait that is.
This piece is all word play, in a captivating sense.



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I could swim in your words a forthright, allow the grace of your soul to squeeze the cells of my heart.

Wonderous!

Regards,
Al

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a fine, fine piece. it gives us a sense of classical literature. such grace with such looks, it shines. Beautiful work Sami.

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I love the classic feel of this one Sami. You truly are gifted. This is lovely.

Julie

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gorgeous writing poetic tribute to lust and love and adoration with great and fanciful descriptions use of words are great u are an accomplished poet bravo love this poem

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dear Sami... Your emotions sigh with vulnerability...
with eyes closed and heart open... the sun and moon
take turns to shine forevermore. truly, Pat

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This is truly classic and fills the heart with love. Striking words as usual

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So very eloquent; your word choice is arcane, but a perfect match to the emotion engendered as I read these lines.

Very much enjoyed Sami.

Beccy.



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