Dawn And Sunset

Dawn And Sunset

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Dawn and sunset By Sami Khalil

 

And at the hour of manifestation;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunset of lamentation.


And at the hour of realization;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunrise of exultation.     

© 2018 Sami Khalil


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Loved reading this powerful poem, Sami!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Giullia king for this marvelous summation and lovely sentiments.
This is wonderful. The refrains are so good. A delicious read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Suhd for taking the time and effort to visit and share. Appreciated.
profoundly ethereal...

//greet the sunset of lamentation// ~ love!

amazing use of language
and word-play ~
lyrical musings of perhaps dark despair visitations before dawn gives birth to continuous glimpses of hope.
~ another poetic gem
you’ve graced all with.

thank you for the read :))





Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Whoa! What a great review and summation. Your are mighty in any criteria. I thank you sincerely and .. read more
ms. barrie

2 Years Ago

you’re very welcomed, Dear Poet. always my pleasure to read such art...and thank you, i wish you .. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)......................
Beautiful in its precise language, brevity and simplicity. Also in the contrast between the moods of the two times of day. And it flows well when read aloud, which is one of my criteria for a good poem. Very well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Million thank yous dear poet and friend for this lovely review and visit. So good to see you. I.. read more
Jennie Baron

2 Years Ago

It's been a while since I visited this page and it was good to find such a good new poem by you. I n.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Best of luck. A great pleasure when you do...
How evocative Sami. Hour of manifestation of grief is expressed through lamentation of time that has lapsed, tears that have unduly been shed and thoughts that had been cast; only to give way to new light of realization thereby liberating you to the path of rejoicement, emancipation and exultation.

Beautifully rendered.

Cheers!
M.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Your words are poetic and beautiful. Thank you so much Mallika for taking the time and for visi.. read more
θεά 

2 Years Ago

My pleasure, Sami.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Salam. Peace.........
A beautiful poem, repetition of the word gave a wonderful tune and rhythm, wish you the best

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Yousra for this lovely review and kind words. Glad you like it. Wishing you wonder.. read more
If there were a way I’d make all joy & sorrow know grace

Regards
Al

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! I love how you sum up things marvelously. I would too. All thanks.
I feel like there is an element of this that is other worldly.....like the essence of it transcends all the conforms of time.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

I feel so too. Thank you for the review.
light and ashes

2 Years Ago

You're welcome
a mesmerizing write. the change from night to day and vice versa are very special. sad when night falls and joyous when daybreak arrives. you've captured it so well. the repetition adds to the feeling being conveyed. a changing of the guard so to speak. good write ... :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated Mr. Pete. I'm so thankful for you taking the time and effort to vi.. read more
The King has spoken.🙂 nice work

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you so much Andrew the great for this amazing review and summation. I will bestow a golde.. read more
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

You stab me through my poets heart!
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Hahaha...........

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