Dawn And Sunset

Contemplations...

Dawn and sunset By Sami Khalil

 

And at the hour of manifestation;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunset of lamentation.

And at the hour of realization;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunrise of exultation.     

Reviews

[Giulia King]

Loved reading this powerful poem, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you so much Giullia king for this marvelous summation and lovely sentiments.

[Suhd]

This is wonderful. The refrains are so good. A delicious read.

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you so much Suhd for taking the time and effort to visit and share. Appreciated.

[ms. barrie]

profoundly ethereal...

//greet the sunset of lamentation// ~ love!

amazing use of language
and word-play ~
lyrical musings of perhaps dark despair visitations before dawn gives birth to continuous glimpses of hope.
~ another poetic gem
you’ve graced all with.

thank you for the read :))

[Sami Khalil]

Whoa! What a great review and summation. Your are mighty in any criteria. I thank you sincerely and wish you all poetic joys.

[ms. barrie]

you’re very welcomed, Dear Poet. always my pleasure to read such art...and thank you, i wish you the very same! :)

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................

[Jennie Baron]

Beautiful in its precise language, brevity and simplicity. Also in the contrast between the moods of the two times of day. And it flows well when read aloud, which is one of my criteria for a good poem. Very well done!

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Million thank yous dear poet and friend for this lovely review and visit. So good to see you. It has been a while.

[Jennie Baron]

It's been a while since I visited this page and it was good to find such a good new poem by you. I no longer visit very often, being a busy novelist! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Best of luck. A great pleasure when you do...

[θεά]

How evocative Sami. Hour of manifestation of grief is expressed through lamentation of time that has lapsed, tears that have unduly been shed and thoughts that had been cast; only to give way to new light of realization thereby liberating you to the path of rejoicement, emancipation and exultation.

Beautifully rendered.

Cheers!
M.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Your words are poetic and beautiful. Thank you so much Mallika for taking the time and for visiting.

[θεά ]

My pleasure, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Salam. Peace.........

[Yousra Alsubaihi]

A beautiful poem, repetition of the word gave a wonderful tune and rhythm, wish you the best

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you so much Yousra for this lovely review and kind words. Glad you like it. Wishing you wonderful things.

[Alfred Kukitz]

If there were a way I’d make all joy & sorrow know grace

Regards
Al

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love how you sum up things marvelously. I would too. All thanks.

[light and ashes]

I feel like there is an element of this that is other worldly.....like the essence of it transcends all the conforms of time.

[Sami Khalil]

I feel so too. Thank you for the review.

[light and ashes]

You're welcome

[Pete]

a mesmerizing write. the change from night to day and vice versa are very special. sad when night falls and joyous when daybreak arrives. you've captured it so well. the repetition adds to the feeling being conveyed. a changing of the guard so to speak. good write ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well articulated Mr. Pete. I'm so thankful for you taking the time and effort to visit. See you soon.

[andrew mitchell]

The King has spoken.🙂 nice work

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Thank you so much Andrew the great for this amazing review and summation. I will bestow a golden pen and a sword upon you.

[andrew mitchell]

You stab me through my poets heart!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...........