See Me Eye to Eye

See Me Eye to Eye

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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See Me Eye to Eye            by Sami Khalil

Romance…



See me eye to eye or run for shelter.

The keys are in the lock,

To unlock our passions, to enter.

Believing or doubting are two opposites... to the center.

Skies of long-ago finding wings in simple flights, greater!

See me eye to eye or run for shelter.

Triumphs over failures, over despairs are the unspoken, hot smelter.

Let us capitalize on our gifts; galaxies circling nothingness in equal portions, reverse motions of wonder.

“Ying” and the “yang”, the “yay” and the “nay” are not but affirmations of inner workings, of building blocks, of mirrors and reflections, stranger…needing sunnier skies to take shape, better coaches to learn through, soaring strengths to higher horizon branching, desiring love for quiet answers, perfect timing for harmony, beating hearts to surrender.

See me eye to eye, in a mad rush, adrift shorter, longer.

An eagle soaring higher and higher, bereft of skies, for odds and ends remain bluer.

© 2020 Sami Khalil


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A true learning can be seen through this powerful write... imparted some moral... masterly written... Thanks for sharing this writing !!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Abhishek. Let me thank you for taking the time and effort to visit. You are appreciated and welco.. read more
aint that true! Nothing in this world cannot work without one or the other. I believe in both polarity and duality that within a duality there is a polarity on each & vice versa. There's up & down, above & below, left & right, wrong & right lol! -- This resonates with myself and my beloved. We're both so opposite, 11 years difference, culturally different, some many other different things, live in two different countries lol but we make do. If we both don't have each 50 of 50 to maintain in regards to similarities and difference I think it will not last or that if one is 60 then the other still has to make it work to 50 but alas, where am I even going with this is -- awesomely penned Sami! :)

- Dolly

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi there dear one. Always amazing when you visit and encouraging when you leave. Good to know that t.. read more
iceintheattic

1 Year Ago

Likewise Sami :)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

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Great piece, Sami. I love the imagery of this particular work - no relationship can truly survive without a deep understanding of one another. Even if two people are opposites, it does not necessarily mean they are a poor or incompatible match; instead, they can complete one another. Keep up the great work!

-Derekv

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

" no relationship can truly survive without a deep understanding of one another. Even if two people .. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Derek. Thank you so much for this awesome truth and review. Great to see you visit...
See me eye to eye or run for shelter.

I felt that this was life with all its wonder and its workings talking to me. The subtle rhyming just enhanced the entire effect. This is such a thinking, speaking poem. Great poetry!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Rania! I love your take on this poem. I'm glad it spoke to you in gentle ways. Many thank yous. T.. read more
Rania

1 Year Ago

Welcome! Lovely to meet you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Same here. Gracie Mille...
two must be equal in order to add up to one. must meet each other where they are. doors can't be unlocked unless both turn they key. everything under creation fits perfectly together when left as intended. strengths and weaknesses in all but complimentary. man has a tendency to interfere in the natural order with a heavy hand. if only we could just let things be - possibilities are endless. good free-flowing write both literally and figuratively ... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Pete. Words of wisdom spring from your pen upon our pages. Much to thank you for and much look fo.. read more
a guiding piece that allows the reader to move to places often locked away, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Thomas. It is a pleasure to see you visit and an honor bestowed to share your thoughts. Thank you.. read more
the universe is ours,just open the door and go after it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Wordman. What a unique and lovely review. So true and well said. Thank you sir...
 wordman

1 Year Ago

you are welcome
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

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lum
Absolutely beautiful. 'The keys are in the lock, to unlock our passions, to enter.' I will think of this poem for a long time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

HiLum. Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to review. Good to see you.
Love these lines ... perfect timing for harmony beating hearts to surrender.” ..hearts truly in love (Surrendered) beating in harmony with each other, beautifully written “see me eye to eye in a mad rush, adrift shorter, longer.” Seeing the real you in truth adrift shorter, longer ... longing to spend more time with you’ .. love this Sami ..great write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Katrina. I'm loving your review so much. So glad you like it. Thank you for all...
Katrina Mckeown

1 Year Ago

You’re very welcome Sami :)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

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dearest Sami.. life does get sweeter as the eyes
see deeper... into the passion of flowers appearing
when sunshine and rain linger. Roses bloom and forgetmenots spread
over past regrets. Spring can be a new beginning in a poem never ending.
truly heart rendering notions. Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

Hi Patricia. What a beautiful, poetic review that can be a poem by itself. You have a great spirit a.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

dear Sami... thank you for your encouraging words. I wish to bring kindness and appreciation as I n.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

So true and well said. Might as you wish and hope as you fish.

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