See Me Eye to Eye

See Me Eye to Eye            by Sami Khalil

Romance…

See me eye to eye or run for shelter.

The keys are in the lock,

To unlock our passions, to enter.

Believing or doubting are two opposites... to the center.

Skies of long-ago finding wings in simple flights, greater!

See me eye to eye or run for shelter.

Triumphs over failures, over despairs are the unspoken, hot smelter.

Let us capitalize on our gifts; galaxies circling nothingness in equal portions, reverse motions of wonder.

“Ying” and the “yang”, the “yay” and the “nay” are not but affirmations of inner workings, of building blocks, of mirrors and reflections, stranger…needing sunnier skies to take shape, better coaches to learn through, soaring strengths to higher horizon branching, desiring love for quiet answers, perfect timing for harmony, beating hearts to surrender.

See me eye to eye, in a mad rush, adrift shorter, longer.

An eagle soaring higher and higher, bereft of skies, for odds and ends remain bluer.

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

A true learning can be seen through this powerful write... imparted some moral... masterly written... Thanks for sharing this writing !!

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Abhishek. Let me thank you for taking the time and effort to visit. You are appreciated and welcome any time.

[iceintheattic]

aint that true! Nothing in this world cannot work without one or the other. I believe in both polarity and duality that within a duality there is a polarity on each & vice versa. There's up & down, above & below, left & right, wrong & right lol! -- This resonates with myself and my beloved. We're both so opposite, 11 years difference, culturally different, some many other different things, live in two different countries lol but we make do. If we both don't have each 50 of 50 to maintain in regards to similarities and difference I think it will not last or that if one is 60 then the other still has to make it work to 50 but alas, where am I even going with this is -- awesomely penned Sami! :)

- Dolly

[Sami Khalil]

Hi there dear one. Always amazing when you visit and encouraging when you leave. Good to know that truth. Be blessed...

[iceintheattic]

Likewise Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

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[Derekv]

Great piece, Sami. I love the imagery of this particular work - no relationship can truly survive without a deep understanding of one another. Even if two people are opposites, it does not necessarily mean they are a poor or incompatible match; instead, they can complete one another. Keep up the great work!

-Derekv

[Sami Khalil]

" no relationship can truly survive without a deep understanding of one another. Even if two people are opposites, it does not necessarily mean they are a poor or incompatible match; instead, they can complete one another."

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Derek. Thank you so much for this awesome truth and review. Great to see you visit...

[Rania M]

See me eye to eye or run for shelter.

I felt that this was life with all its wonder and its workings talking to me. The subtle rhyming just enhanced the entire effect. This is such a thinking, speaking poem. Great poetry!

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Rania! I love your take on this poem. I'm glad it spoke to you in gentle ways. Many thank yous. Take care.

[Rania M]

Welcome! Lovely to meet you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

Same here. Gracie Mille...

[Pete]

two must be equal in order to add up to one. must meet each other where they are. doors can't be unlocked unless both turn they key. everything under creation fits perfectly together when left as intended. strengths and weaknesses in all but complimentary. man has a tendency to interfere in the natural order with a heavy hand. if only we could just let things be - possibilities are endless. good free-flowing write both literally and figuratively ... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Pete. Words of wisdom spring from your pen upon our pages. Much to thank you for and much look for. Take care sir Pete...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a guiding piece that allows the reader to move to places often locked away, well done, good read.

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Thomas. It is a pleasure to see you visit and an honor bestowed to share your thoughts. Thank you kindly.

[wordman]

the universe is ours,just open the door and go after it

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Wordman. What a unique and lovely review. So true and well said. Thank you sir...

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

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[lum]

Absolutely beautiful. 'The keys are in the lock, to unlock our passions, to enter.' I will think of this poem for a long time.

[Sami Khalil]

HiLum. Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to review. Good to see you.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Love these lines ... perfect timing for harmony beating hearts to surrender.” ..hearts truly in love (Surrendered) beating in harmony with each other, beautifully written “see me eye to eye in a mad rush, adrift shorter, longer.” Seeing the real you in truth adrift shorter, longer ... longing to spend more time with you’ .. love this Sami ..great write

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Katrina. I'm loving your review so much. So glad you like it. Thank you for all...

[Katrina Mckeown]

You’re very welcome Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

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[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Sami.. life does get sweeter as the eyes
see deeper... into the passion of flowers appearing
when sunshine and rain linger. Roses bloom and forgetmenots spread
over past regrets. Spring can be a new beginning in a poem never ending.
truly heart rendering notions. Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Hi Patricia. What a beautiful, poetic review that can be a poem by itself. You have a great spirit and a talented pen. Thank you for visiting and sharing.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami... thank you for your encouraging words. I wish to bring kindness and appreciation as I near the winter of life.
Of course some of us may have another Spring and Summer, and so on. truly, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well said. Might as you wish and hope as you fish.