Deadly Love

Here I am

Alone

Sitting on the graves of the dead

Separated from the living

I feel the night closing in on me

Yet my tears stream down slowly

Painting a Blood red stain upon these graves

Reaching for you

My hands touched yours

Just for a minute

Then it passed through

All the pain overwhelmed

Bits of my soul scattered

Across the sky

Yet I linger here

Listening to the Beautiful melody

Of the Ghostly screams

They watch me

In the deadly silence

They see me

For what I really am

I stare back

Waiting for my sacrifice

In this moment

I known

Now my eyes close

In Remembrance

One last time

I reach for you

Passing through you

Now I know

My place is with you

This is where it end

Slowly my Heart beats to an end

Awaited my fated end

Now with my last breath

Our love is finally Alive.  

Reviews

[Heather]

this is veryy deep. i can feel the imagination within the words you wrote
amazing job (:

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Now my eyes close
In Remembrance
One last time
I reach for you

...............good lines written in simple lines but deep. with regards.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Riveting...........hauntingly sad. Well done. You may want to read back over a few of the words and add a few letters but overall, excellent