Sunlight on the Floor I

The sunlight lies across the floor,

casting squares and dimensions of light

 

A storm of light floods through my window

Reviews

[Kamari's]

Great imagery contained in simple lines I like how you described the suns storm of light brilliant a magnificent structure bravo!

[Samuel Pennell]

Thank you, Kamari! I was going for simplicity and saying as much in as little space as possible.

[Kamari's]

Well you pulled it off

[Sami Khalil]

Your images are marvelous.
"A storm of light floods through my window"
Simply amazing...:)...........

[Samuel Pennell]

Thank you, Sam! I very much appreciate you reading all of my poems the way you do. Your poems are amazing, too!

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you kindly. You are welcome...:)...............