Summer

Summer

A Poem by Haruki

Moonlit garden path

How delicious is the wind

Slowly drifting through

© 2008 Haruki


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Beautifully conceptualized grasp on nature and its magical effects.. passion written in essence,
and takes the reader to another place and time..has an air of classic romance, speaking valumes

with minimal wording, yet the imagery comes to life and lends itself as an impressional portrait of
the night, being wisked away in the breeze, the floating feeling is woven with a sense of wonder,

I really enjoyed reading the detail and everything the meaning intels, keep up the great work.
Take Care, Mike

Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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really nice haiku...one of those moments, with the wind drifting through that alleviates a bit of the heat.

i also see two lovers drifting through a garden...slowly...like or with the wind...

well done.

jacob

Posted 7 Years Ago


Enlightened with pleasure
With the moonlit piece
Chuckle happily

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lovely, lovely Haiku. This just flows, Haruki. These suckers are hard to do, you have nailed it! Angi~

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful and quiet as a summer evening in the garden. This was good. Phantom........

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm smelling honeysuckle and roses! Great piece. Very powerful short poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah! This is ever so beuatiful, I can feel the love out pour from this.
It's very sincere. Splendid write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Absolutely beautiful, Haruki ... Breathtaking haiku ... hugs

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely beautiful haiku! You really defined nature at its best. This is going in my favorites.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

a very breathtaking haiku... very sweet and enjoyable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tis was a great Haiku... my images are widely spread ....such an innocence here.. loved it.
be well,
l.gandr�

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Green Bay, WI



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I have so little time these days to write. I come to read your work and to be inspired. I may not have the time to post my own work but I look forward to reading yours. Please send me read request .. more..

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