Summer

Moonlit garden path

How delicious is the wind

Slowly drifting through

Reviews

[Michael X]

Beautifully conceptualized grasp on nature and its magical effects.. passion written in essence,
and takes the reader to another place and time..has an air of classic romance, speaking valumes

with minimal wording, yet the imagery comes to life and lends itself as an impressional portrait of
the night, being wisked away in the breeze, the floating feeling is woven with a sense of wonder,

I really enjoyed reading the detail and everything the meaning intels, keep up the great work.
Take Care, Mike

[Dianne]

I quite agree! In summer, I live for a breeze.

[Dani California]

It took me there. I love breezes that caress my face,
especially in the evening for some reason.

Yeah, I'm there.

Lovely! :)

[Forest Green]

...filled with yearning...? ;)

Nice nugget you've written. A sparkle of emotion.

Daniel

[T]

ah nice!!!:)

[Rainbowco]

Lovely.

[Mistral Bilgera]

nice haiku! very summer-y feel :)