The Hat

The Hat

A Poem by Haruki

I perceive the sensation of a hat on my head

 

Floppy canvas brimmed

 

Obstructing my view of

 

A pine tree draped with snow.

 

Days later

 

Melted snow drops from the tree

 

And plops on the brim.

 

Whatever became of the hat?

 

 

© 2009 Haruki


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humorous and tickles the heart, its as if what we wish for exists in daydreams and to make
dreams reality all one has to do is believe, but i love the way you literally painted with words.
fresh snow,pine trees, winter bliss...the talent to capture the essence

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this, to me it's not so much of an emotional write but more of a riddle, more entertaining and intended to provoke thought and questions. It feels like a poem intended to produce more questions than answers and I like that

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah! I really like this. I found this comforting really as well as a loss.
This is a emotional write. Very well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very philosophical question... yes the hat not only for protection and style but shielding us from hazards of life, i think in life to many of us wear a hat... I think it's time to let the sunshine upon my head and let my mind feel the heat of life. Very nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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