The enigmatic Time

From a little toddler to adult, from cute toys to mystical offices

Life brings about several phases that colors it in mysterious ways,

Driving force being time, often cruel but enigmatic, transforms souls of all kinds.

Feelings and emotions troll up high at multi-phased enigmatic life…

All these define, not just some, but at times people of different kinds

Transforming nature of this enigma often causes ambiguity,

Loss for some and gain for others brings about neutrality in society

Mind wanders around and over enigma in several ways and several times;

I behold my thoughts and anxiety to understand, in parts, this enigmatic nature of life and time…

Not all questions need to be answered, not all times need to be the way desired

Powerful and dominant nature of time becomes my answer for the while..

Realization of the fact that nothing is permanent,

No feeling or material object stationary, brings wisdom to my mind…

Therefore I choose to flow with waves sometimes, for whatever happens is for good

Better phases would definitely follow…this thought brings respect and endurance

For the ENIGMATIC NATURE OF TIME.

 

Reviews

[Riley Justine]

Really well written. Not sure if you left "enigmatic" lowercase in the title on purpose or not...but I would probably capitalize it.
Other than that an extremely creative and well done piece!

[Willard Wells]

One hell of a write you have here. Great work. Close to giving me a headache as I followed the flow of the twisted plot of time and reality. It sucked me in deeper and deeper into your imagery of thought.

Very well done. Thank you and I will look forward to exploring some more of your works. Peace out!

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thought provoking! If I was going to say something construcitve, and some would disagree probably I would change the 3rd line to-often cruel but enigmatic, driving force being time, transforms souls of all kinds, not loosing anything, but I think it flows better. And in the next line I would add the word all before different kinds, again no particular reason except to me when reading, it flows better. I great piece.

[Schatzi]

Wow . . . Your poem really stimulates the mind. I felt a strong emotional reaction and that was most unexpected. Very beautifully written and well structured. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing!

[TheMalady]

Your poems are very meaningful and deep-provoking! You have the unique way of delivering your emotions through profound words. Thanks a lot for sharing this one! :)

[Richard Patrick]

very beautifuly written, it is true when we are young, we do not
understand what it means to be old. They seem mystic in their knowledge
when we to grow old our children look at us as though we have had some
great deal of knowledge. Once a plane was impossible.
I remember writing with a pen and than a typewriter. Now everyone has a
computer. We learned how to use pullies and levers, now it is done by
computers.
What would happen if there was no energy for them. Than what would happen
we depend on the computer more than we depend on man.

Sincerely


Richard Patrick Edwards

[Krizito]

Deep theme and great choice of words. The story the poem conveyed was really great and clear. This is in my opinion, a great piece of work

[sansrity sinha]

glad that you liked it!

[Ashley Arita]

This is a very deep poem. I like that it talks about life in general and the experiences that it gives us. What I would out put more of are similes and metaphors, but it's really great.