Happiness

Happiness

A Poem by sansrity sinha

What makes me happy?


A tricky question!

An unending list!

A vicious circle!

For a mind like mine!


I find joy in birds chirping;

I find joy in flower blooming;

I enjoy dusk and dawn,

And I admire starry night!


I enjoy solitude;

I enjoy melancholy songs!

I enjoy group chats;

I also enjoy endless talks!


When infants laugh,

I feel the ecstasy!

When elders talk,

I feel warmth…


The world around is just so adorable;

If one has the optimism!

As beauty lies in the eyes of beholder,

Happiness lies in minds and souls!

© 2016 sansrity sinha


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Love it! The message is one we all need to have a look at every once in a while to remind us how amazing life really is. It's the attitude that counts, the attitude that changes everything. Well done, keep it up! xx

Posted 2 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

2 Years Ago

thank you :)
Lovely poem!!
Well done!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Really nice poem and well done..Keep it up and thanks for sharing...

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)
You will find happiness everywhere only if the blending of heart and mind gets contented seeing the situation...
nicely composed....

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

thank you so much!
Very pretty analogy. I love how you take everything up with such optimism. Good for you indeed! You truly see the beauty in everything around you. Keep at it (:

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

it is the attitude that makes all the difference at the end of the day i guess..that is what I wante.. read more
Beauty is what you write, inspiration is the perspiration born out from the pores of your poem. As long as we choose to be happy, happiness chooses to reside in us...good job Sansrity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

thank you so much! glad that you liked it!
The world around is just so adorable;
If one has the optimism!
As beauty lies in the eyes of beholder,
Happiness lies in minds and souls!

So very true... lovely piece of work... enjoyed it....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)
This is a beautiful piece. Wonderful job! My only suggestion would be to change the fourth line of the second stanza; in proper English, one cannot "find rejoice" because "rejoice" is an action by itself. Other than that, you've done really well!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for the review. thanks fr the correction. i will make the changes! :)
This sounds like my sister and me. Give us anything in nature to look at and we love looking at it. Love babies too. More people should be thankful for the good in the world around them. Valentine

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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