Freedom

Freedom

A Poem by sansrity sinha

Amidst clouds of regulations,

Amidst chains of paradoxes;

Inside a vicious circle of situations;

Lies a hopeful, unbounded me!


All set to break the prodigies lay;

All set to fly in the clear sky

Across all clouds of doubtfulness,

I know…there lies above... the clear sunny sky


I know my limits, strengths and weaknesses

I see the fine line,

Between imagination and rationalism

I know, one fine day I would be free…


I would be me once again!

I would be unbounded yet again!

I would be powerful once again!

I would reach my goal for sure!


Darkness shall soon fade,

Clouds would soon vanish!

  Stars glow in the dark nights

  Sun appears daily, with all its might;

  My strength would soon be regained;

  What I have lost will soon be reclaimed!!

 

© 2016 sansrity sinha


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Simply superb! the rhythm, the rhyme, the massage , all just perfectly woven into a truly compelling piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


"Darkness shall soon fade,
Clouds would soon vanish!
Stars glow in the dark nights
Sun appears daily, with all its might;
My strength would soon be regained;
What I have lost will soon be reclaimed!!"

these lines got me goosebumps! An amazing write!! loved reading it!

keep writing :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

7 Years Ago

:) thank you so much!
Very moving words. There's strength and resilience.
A confident powerful voice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

7 Years Ago

thank you :)
Powerful! Freedom makes you feel real, huh? I suppose it is something of beauty to shape a reality, the idea of being able to soar freely. It is an open rhyme scheme. Sometimes the lines rhyme, sometimes they do not, and that's a lovely change from most structured poetry. Word choice is strong. I like it! Definitely up for consideration and looking forward to seeing how it competes among the other submissions. Good work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice write up.. touching..keep it blowing

Posted 7 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
So inspiring.. a very lovely written...

Posted 7 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

7 Years Ago

thank you so much!
Lovely poem!
Keep on writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

7 Years Ago

thank you emily!

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