metephores

metephores

A Poem by Saosinkid (Death whispers 2 me)
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im just stupid

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is love a drug or a gun?? can love be used as a metaphore?? can it.. love is a rose right? it has its thorns yet its beautiful..bugs prey on it but they are stung by the beautiful roses dark thorns... and yet can love be compared to a metaphore? is it really like this or is it different for everyone..everyone is different so who says love is one love...how about if theres as many love as there are humans maybe even more... so all love is a different snowflake as we humans are... is that a metaphore?? so am i wrong... love is complicatining... as ppl see a heart so beautiful yet a true heart is ugly and hides in the inside of your body grasping for the air we deprive it... and if love comes from the heart is it beautiful or as ugly as the heart...a simle now...metaphore simlie..so confusing..love...

© 2009 Saosinkid (Death whispers 2 me)


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"as ppl see a heart so beautiful yet a true heart is ugly and hides in the inside of your body grasping for the air we deprive it..."

You are a skilled writer.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

on your stupit like what you write
your poem has shine of big idea :
everyone is different so who says love is one love

sep jez for your good job !

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Saosinkid (Death whispers 2 me)
Saosinkid (Death whispers 2 me)

Douglas, AZ



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im just that one "emo" kid in the small cuntarded town of Douglas, Arizona. I like to be different, you dont like me, i dont care. "Oh, you're back to me and the hunger returns, i told myself i was .. more..

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