you are gone to town

you are gone to town

A Poem by sarah

you were gone to town and you got home and found a bunddle of red roses on your bed and you wonder who they are from then you happen to notice a card on your dresser and you open it up and you read it and it says I love you baby i always want to be with you you make me happy and then you see  his name at the bottom of the card  he wrote it as neat as he possiable could

© 2011 sarah


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thanks i am sorry that no punntuation was at school whan i wrote part of it at school

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really sweet, but please add some punctuation! Other than that it's great.

Posted 12 Years Ago


thanks for the reviews

Posted 12 Years Ago


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journel poetry is rather cool....gives poetry that realtime feel. very nice and very sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


So sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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