Dream

childish madness

o people listen, o people listen

 I left home

for my dreams,for my dreams

                                                       o people listen,o people listen

                                                       I don't care

                                                       whatever you think,whatever you speak

                                                       for my dreams,for my dreams

                                 

 I am alive for my dream

 and my destiny is my dream

my dreams doesn't go against humanity

as it is itself for  humanity.

                                                                                  my dreams are good or bad

                                                                                 I even don't need to explain

                                                                                 because god knows better  all

                                                                                about my dreams, about my dreams

o people listen,o people listen

I am alive for my dream

and I can die for my dreams

                                        if fate is with me or against

                                        i even don't care

                                        as  one day it will change

                                        for my dreams,for my dreams

Author's Note

Dream is of full of error, i am known and i accept it, this was my first poetry or may call it a childish madness,

Okay, So I Thank everyone and care of their precious time..

love S.a

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and hopeful words.
"if fate is with me or against
i even don't care
as one day it will change
for my dreams,for my dreams"
I don't believe in fate. We decide our journey good or bad. One right or wrong turn. We will find our proper ending. Without dreams and hope. What do we have left? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sarik]

This is my greatness sir,your encouragement will be needed everytime I share..

Very much pleased..

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[kyam]

Very well written. I like the standing up for your dreams and being alive or dying for dreams, very passionately written........Kyam99

[sarik]

thanku kyam...

[Shah Sabia]

"My dreams dont"
This is the correct sentence, please rectify it.
Good attempt, keep it up.

[sarik]

will think about it sabia
anyway ty

[Divya]

Poem is like a song in a movie. Message conveyed is beautiful. One should stick to his dreams. But effective words are not used. Still gud attempt and keep it up.

[sarik]

I realize the same thing,still working hard to improve these mistake..
and thanx a lot for your kind advice.I will work hard to improve it as much as i can...

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Indeed there are a lot of grammar errors.. But message to dream and then to work for it, is conveyed clearly..

[sarik]

ty Divya that you liked my poem and thanq again for realize my mistakes, I hope i will learn a lot in you guys company...
please remind my mistake if you find it again on my next poetry also i am trying hard to improve all this mistake

[Sanjukta Sen Banerjee]

The message is crisp and powerful but you need to work on grammar and powerful usage of language.All said and done the boldness is the true spirit of humanity

[sarik]

very thanx sanjukta
and I am working on grammer and on phrases both.