Dream

Dream

A Poem by sarik
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childish madness

"
o people listen, o people listen
 I left home
for my dreams,for my dreams
                                                       o people listen,o people listen
                                                       I don't care
                                                       whatever you think,whatever you speak
                                                       for my dreams,for my dreams
                                 
 I am alive for my dream
 and my destiny is my dream
my dreams doesn't go against humanity
as it is itself for  humanity.
                                                                                  my dreams are good or bad
                                                                                 I even don't need to explain
                                                                                 because god knows better  all
                                                                                about my dreams, about my dreams
o people listen,o people listen
I am alive for my dream
and I can die for my dreams
                                        if fate is with me or against
                                        i even don't care
                                        as  one day it will change
                                        for my dreams,for my dreams

© 2016 sarik


Author's Note

sarik
Dream is of full of error, i am known and i accept it, this was my first poetry or may call it a childish madness,

Okay, So I Thank everyone and care of their precious time..

love S.a

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Powerful and hopeful words.
"if fate is with me or against
i even don't care
as one day it will change
for my dreams,for my dreams"
I don't believe in fate. We decide our journey good or bad. One right or wrong turn. We will find our proper ending. Without dreams and hope. What do we have left? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


sarik

5 Years Ago

This is my greatness sir,your encouragement will be needed everytime I share..

Very m.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
Very well written. I like the standing up for your dreams and being alive or dying for dreams, very passionately written........Kyam99

Posted 6 Years Ago


sarik

6 Years Ago

thanku kyam...
"My dreams dont"
This is the correct sentence, please rectify it.
Good attempt, keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sarik

6 Years Ago

will think about it sabia
anyway ty
Poem is like a song in a movie. Message conveyed is beautiful. One should stick to his dreams. But effective words are not used. Still gud attempt and keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sarik

6 Years Ago


I realize the same thing,still working hard to improve these mistake..
and thanx a lo.. read more
Indeed there are a lot of grammar errors.. But message to dream and then to work for it, is conveyed clearly..

Posted 6 Years Ago


sarik

6 Years Ago

ty Divya that you liked my poem and thanq again for realize my mistakes, I hope i will learn a lot i.. read more
Sanjukta Sen Banerjee

6 Years Ago

The message is crisp and powerful but you need to work on grammar and powerful usage of language.All.. read more
sarik

6 Years Ago

very thanx sanjukta
and I am working on grammer and on phrases both.

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Added on July 28, 2015
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sarik

delhi, north India, India



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