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Alcohol

Alcohol

A Poem by Lord Sarthak
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Alcohol may be man's worst enemy, but the bible says love your enemy.

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Alcohol is a very interesting thing created by man
Many people say that if you are addicted to it, it depletes your health

The pleasure you get while drinking Wine with Gf/Wife is simply majestic
Believe me it is the best medicine one should take when he gets sick

Alcohol is the best thing that could have ever happened to me
Whiskey and rum are the two alcoholic beverages loved by sailors who sailed in sea 

For Bachelors like me it is a source which relieves us from our inner pain
one of the reason i drink is,bcoz all my efforts to find true love went in vain

The most soothing moment of your day would be when u have a couple of beers with your old pals.
Believe me alcohol has the power to increase your morale

People dont want to understand the reason that why a person drinks.
Well let me tell you,people drink bcoz they were cheated and betrayed by those persons whose mind stinks 

They drink bcoz they are lonely 
When no one listens to them, they pass their time by sitting under a tree

I have seen people so lonely that when they get drunk they start talking to walls.
These guys dont have friends like you to hang out with in a Mall

I am not telling u people to understand my or their pain
Its of no use bcoz those rascals who hurt us, have already gained

U guys dont blame them,you blame only us why????
We are people who dont sleep at night,we only watch the stars in the sky

I dont demand anything great,i just want a glass of beer everyday when i wake up.
And hey please dont recommend a boring doctor up

I love drinking.
So please shut the f**k up and keep your advise to urself before u receive a good beating 

© 2016 Lord Sarthak


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Hello Lord Sarthak,

I had a good laugh while reading this. I love your tagline! :) I noticed there are a few lines with different sizes and fonts, in addition to dropping the apostrophe with contractions, which are all technical issues. Also, I was wondering if your choice of spelling and abbreviations for words was due to the topic of alcohol or simply an artistic choice. If it was because of the topic of alcohol, I think that is funny. You could play around with that even more if you started to slur your words and mix up your spelling of words, such as: hhheeeyyy, instead of hey or wrods, instead of words. Again, just a silly suggestion because of the topic.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord Sarthak

5 Years Ago

Thanks mate, next time i will improve on the things u have told me and yes i am a drunkard. Hahahaha.. read more
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I hope you don't need anymore....
Remember your promise !!!
By the way poem is nice and funny too : )

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord Sarthak

4 Years Ago

yes i remember my promise
Hello Lord Sarthak,

I had a good laugh while reading this. I love your tagline! :) I noticed there are a few lines with different sizes and fonts, in addition to dropping the apostrophe with contractions, which are all technical issues. Also, I was wondering if your choice of spelling and abbreviations for words was due to the topic of alcohol or simply an artistic choice. If it was because of the topic of alcohol, I think that is funny. You could play around with that even more if you started to slur your words and mix up your spelling of words, such as: hhheeeyyy, instead of hey or wrods, instead of words. Again, just a silly suggestion because of the topic.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lord Sarthak

5 Years Ago

Thanks mate, next time i will improve on the things u have told me and yes i am a drunkard. Hahahaha.. read more
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