Hmm.

Hmm.

A Poem by lifesanexcursion

Fortune falls
Although it rises.
Secrets unknown
Full of surprises.

People wonder
Strangers dare,
But who is known
From those who stare?

Release inside
Only what must,
Not stay inside,
To those you trust.

BELIEVE

© 2010 lifesanexcursion


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This is amazing, Quite profound really. Written so well. I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme in this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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... ah ... lucid ... poetic ... profound ... moving ... powerful ... 3 tequila shots for the disillusioned believer ... thank you for writing this and thank you for sharing it ... (highest rating) ...

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