Eye-Openers

Eye-Openers

A Poem by Satish Verma
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Can you contain it; the call,

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Can you contain it; 
the call, 
one animal? 



A baby hurt, 
sometimes― 
you enjoy. 



The full moon was― 
as poor as, 
a church mouse. 




Sitting in court 
watching a 
finch play with water.

© 2019 Satish Verma


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I have to say each of these I saw seperately and each leaves the reader thinking, wondering as images are mixed and there is some discordant phrases.

Posted 10 Months Ago


My mind is blown. This was truly a brilliantly creative write. I’d say to the uncreative- this poem would seem simple and drab- but oh my! To the mind that thinks out of the box- this poem is right on point and written perfectly, and with such subtle depth

Posted 10 Months Ago



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Added on April 23, 2019
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