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Desires and Obsession

Desires and Obsession

A Poem by Toshita
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What images desire and obsession form in my mind.

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Desires and Obsession

By Toshita

 

The taste of sweet blood,

The sounds of dangerous floods.

 

The smell of your fear

With the horrible buzzing you hear.

 

A tainted love, a painful desire...

So painful it sets your soul on fire.

© 2010 Toshita


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There's a lot going on here. It feels like a sort compilation of all sorts of different obsessions. They initial intent seems to contradict that, but I liked it regardless.
Very barefaced and passionate. And the lines coincide in a sort of seamed way, that shouldn't work, but I found it really interesting.
Really lovely piece!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow i loved this! nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


There's a lot going on here. It feels like a sort compilation of all sorts of different obsessions. They initial intent seems to contradict that, but I liked it regardless.
Very barefaced and passionate. And the lines coincide in a sort of seamed way, that shouldn't work, but I found it really interesting.
Really lovely piece!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hey, my name is Toshita. I love writing- anything from stories to music. I play the guitar, piano and the trombone. I love reading and photography is also a beloved hobby. Follow me on the social medi.. more..

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